All Comments on 'Daughters - Susan Ch. 02'

Well, I suppose we'll be able to tell from the scores this story receives, which readers can tell the difference between "fiction," and which ones can't. *grin*

The next story in the series is titled 'Daughters - Eve,' concerning how the whole FIT conspiracy got its start. Don't miss it, please!

I'm not quite sure which section I will post it in, though...

well though a bit weird on the long run with the whole plot which may seems uncomfy, i still think its a nice piece of fiction. (i hope it is at least :p) Lisa you just have style. you shoudl become a professional writer

I very much enjoyed this next submission, Lisa. It is so well written and the plot flows along smoothly, I could continue to read this forever. I feel a little sorry for the males invoved, however the hot lesbian sex more than makes up for it! I will be looking forward to your next chapter. Keep up the excellent work. RCG

A FITTing ending to a FITTing story, didn't see Susan getting the best of both worlds when Brianna joined in but I certainly enjoyed it as much as she did!!!!

More of the same please can't wait for Daughters - Eve FITT Rules

I look forward to future submissions Lisa. You have style. I think I need to swim across the Atlantic and ring your doorbell!

Now there's an ending I hadn't expected! Fascinating! It's very much like a short story 'Freckles', by C. Margery Kempe, though the endings, while similar, are totally different. I love your work.

Im a full blown 100% lesbian, but I hafta admit some guy must have done something REALLY horrible to the author lol.

I've Read Both 1 And 2 The Story Is Well Told To The Point I Had To Register To Post My Comment It's A Very Good Story He Got What He Deserved .

SOME FUCKED UP FEMALES. LOSERS

Don't pay any attention to that comment.! Know for opinion: can't wait to start the next chapter. I have been pondering the ability you've revealed in creating the complex dialogue for this FIT organization.

Another 5🌟 's

A great story. If the artist reads this, let it be known I'd love to read more of this so very scary, yet very sexy, conversion of female kind!

Lisa, thank you so much for this story. I don't know why it took me so long to read this, but I enjoyed it very much. The seduction and descriptions of how Susan was feeling made me connect to the story. I loved the surprise at the end of having Bri join her mother in welcoming Susan into their group. I was wet throughout the story but that sent me flying!

As the LGBT community smashing big waves worldwide over the society, may this scenario will become a part of future lifestyle, compared to jules verne " travelling to the moon" or " ttravell to the center of the earth" or "captain nemo" ...... So yes sapphic love is much more fullfilling, hear&say from lesbian friends ..... Good read