All Comments on 'David & 'Lyssa Ch. 02'

But I would like you to elaberat more, when you talk about the sex scenes.

I'm no fantasy reader, but I could hardly stop reading!

Keep it up, for yourself and Your Brother!

John/Namizujs

Budapest

I like this story! Not a whole lot of sex, but still damn fine work! This is damn good sci-fi; your brother left a literary legacy to be proud of! Please, share more!

Entertaining, with more twists than a mountain road. Please scan and submit the rest of this. Your brother truly spun a good story.

Your brother really knew how to spin an interesting tale (and usually fantasy dragon stories bore me to tears). I'm sure you're proud of his accomplishments!

I find your lack of detail disturbing.