Dawn over Sun Valley Ch. 04

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"So, princess... shall I walk you to your room and let you have your beauty sleep, or would you like to return to my place tonight?"

Leanne smiled wide. "I would love to get back to your place, but could we swing by my room first? I'd like to bring my toiletry bag and a change of clothes for tomorrow morning this time."

Joe bowed his head, and answered with a straight face. "As you wish, princess."

Leanne bit her lip hard to keep from blurting anything stupid. Like 'I love you, too'.

After a moment's pause, Joe smiled faintly, and took her hand. "Come on, sweetheart. Let's go."

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Privates1stClassPrivates1stClass6 months ago

When male and female personalities align, sparks are possible. In this case, not only do we have sparks, but a roaring flame. Then you go and include Princess Bride in the mix. Joe and Leanne have a monster conflagration approaching. Love the story and love the writing. Moving on to the next chapter.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uabout 1 year ago

In your introduction, you mentioned this was a genre you hadn't written before and not sure how it would go. I'm usually a reader of intrigue and action, as well as the erotica on here. And here I am binge reading this because you have the elements right, setting, intrigue, humour, 2 great characters. Not to mention heating up the bedroom, by the pond with their sexuality. A good book is hard to put down, Anne, you have achieved that status for me. Cheers, Andy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Even if you hadn’t given us the “Princess Bride” reference I’d have voted 5 ⭐️, so that’s a 10 then!

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Great!

Wow!

Incredible this story!

I have seen the movie "The Princess Bride" many times and I love it. Apart from the romance story, I really like the phrase "Hello, my name is Iñigo Montoya, you killed my father, prepare to die". I do not know if in the original version it was the same name of the character and if they were the same words, many times, with the translation they change the words too much.

I'm going to continue reading this great story.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet, and forever), is not my native language.

swrdswrdover 8 years ago
perfect

loved the erotic sex scene and the Princess Bride reference is a lot to look forward for!

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