All Comments on 'Daydream Believer: Discovery'

The big question is, does love exist, and what are its limits. Relatively few creatures form permanent couples because in nature the chances of one of the couple being eliminated are too great. There are a lot of contributions by other horny animals.

Did you ever imagine a bureaucrat deciding that perfection of records require DNA

evidence of fatherhood to give out a birth certificate!

It's the old sad case of the wife and the husband's best friend. The asshole is lucky he didn't crack him in the head with the bat. As for the cunt wife who only loves her husband, she deserves to be horsewhipped. Well, maybe I exaggerated but you get my drift. Fucking cunt.

too much info and the baloon pops. TK U MLJ LV NV

“Ah, you fucking asshole!” – HE’S a fucking asshole?!

He has fucked your woman for years and fathered her kid and you aim for the ass with the bat??? Head and balls should be a bloody mess and the cunt needs some pain as well.... Well done, needs better editing....4****

Boring! If hubby had any balls he would have beaten them both bloody and u conscious. What a sissy! Now the Evil Cunt lawyer wife will get everything and still fuck that piece of shit Steve while sissy boy hubby gets nothing. Fucking stupid

He was supposed to be a smart man. Why go to jail over a couple of cheaters? Not good.

but later Something will appear in spades. TK U MLJ LV NV no stars

Husband should have done video and pics first. Then he would have had a counter weapon in the eventual divorce and criminal proceedings, especially that admission about Zach. He next needed to sends copies to multiple places for safe keeping. Then he should have given Steve a beat down. So listen Guys, ALWAYS RECORD FIRST!!!! THEN GO RAMBO!!!!

That's it....That's it???????????

Even more pathetic........stop while you're behind, dumbass.

Can't believe he only hit him once. The story started good and is getting sort of stupid.

But there is no way that she loves Mac. Anyone that cheats, let alone cheats and lies for years, does not love their spouse, does not respect them, and certainly doesn't deserve to be trusted ever again.

I really hope that there is no reconciliation. I'm not one for physical punishment, but surely someone such a Jeanie deserves to be kicked to the curb after years of lying to Mac and deliberately cheating on him. Not to mention what she has done to the family.

Very good story, one that for some reason.I haven't seen before. Love the ending.

More retribution

I'd have given you 5*'s without a seconds thought!!!

Was wifes eyes crossed by pain or pleasure?? I would have swung for Steves head!!!

Great story again, but he should have hit him twice.

Damn

Read this six years ago. the wife loves him. HA. What a load of shit. Fucking cunt. Should have hurt him more.

5 stars - I would not have stopped at one whack - she would have gotten one as well - a forever memento of an ended marriage.

From now on, any mention of drinking whiskey to deal with the situation is going to mean lowering the score by at least one.

solid fucking connection...........its all fun and games till the truth comes out.

No male with a Y-chromosome acts like this guy did! Go down stairs and have a drink? Then, go back up stairs and spectate? This guy is 90% on the way to being a beta boy! Damn good writing, but a major disconnect.

Very good beginning of a story.

This guy is a total wuss. Men do not act like this unless they are cucks.Society is i trouble as hotwifing and cukolding.......same exact thing... is growing rapidly, as men become more and more submissive. That is why behavior such as this example becomes more and more acceptable. Also, two point reductio for using the standard solution in a bottle...

This was an excellent story. I was frustrated by husbands initial inaction upon discovering the cheating couple. But once he got traction, redeemed himself nicely. It’s good to see a story where the couple fights for the marriage through all the crap that comes before healing.

On an unrelated note, I don’t understand the multitude of comments from people who are disappointed the husband doesn’t go scorched earth on the wife. Clearly there at many angry readers on Lit

Says a lot about an author who turns off voting but allows comments...

Well, I'm sorry but I can only score this heavy and lethargic, sleep-inducing and somewhat dull re-telling of the oldest plot on Lit-erock with just TWO STARS! Nothing at all wrong with re-telling a tired old story, IF you do so with individuality, some degree of panáche, style, or originality, not repetitively rambling round in circles, then jumping! Rather tedious start to this saga, -doesn't bode at all well for wallowing into the second chapter! This one was far too dreary a drudge to wade through, IMHO, like wading chest-deep through treacle, hard-work to get anywhere, and impossible to make any real sense of! But, I will TRY to persevere, though more in hope than anticipation! Little danger of getting over-excited, after all...

This is an emotionless telling of what should be a world changing heartbreaking story.

My last reading of this author.

Bill S.

Could see this coming after the third sentence I hope he broke his balls and cock (jaybee186)