All Comments on 'Days of Our Wives'

by Smokey125

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GentlytwistedGentlytwistedalmost 6 years ago
Tear jerker

If you still have a dry eye after reading this, you might have a problem.

Good work, Smoke - keep it up!

stroudlestroudlealmost 6 years ago
Loved this

The relationship between Hailey and Sasha epitomised the meaning of love . The part where Sasha was on the play equipment calling for her wife was heartfelt .

A wonderful story of how true love can conquer all difficulties that try to derail it , even if its a close call at times .

Beautiful story Smokey

Thank you

JC

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Ups and Downs

Very good story, the way you came at it was refreshing. Please more stories like this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Very good stuff

Good tension written into this, pretty rare sound these parts

stroudlestroudlealmost 6 years ago
Five star

Wonderful love story. The part where Sasha is confused on play equipment and calling for Hailey is heartfelt.

Great how true love can conquer all that is in its path , even if there is the odd bump along the way.

Smokey at your best

Thank you

Jc

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Love the cute dialog!

Annoyingly so love it haha! Thanks Smokey!

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