All Comments on 'De Sauveterre Mansion'

First, this was probably in the wrong category. Second, I simply got lost in the words. I think, in an attempt to be clever, you tried too hard. I simply didn't enjoy reading and re-reading passages to make sure I knew what was happening. In the end, I simply didn't care what happened. Maybe next time less words and a better plot.

Too Good, do another!

That was a wonderful story. Thank you!!!!

Especially liked Cindy getting hers...wonderful writing!!!

This was one of the best stories I've ever read here! Incredibly erotic and romantic at the same time. Great job!

got almost half way in part 2 and gave up on the sorry story , what a joke

Thank you everyone for your feedback (positive and negative). It encourages me and clues me in on what I may need to improve.

Wow!! loved it!! Keep writing tons more stories!

I must say at 1st i wasn't a bit skeptical about the story, but as it went on... Man was i hooked the ending everything was PERFECT, Well done sir, This one clearly deserves a chapter 2 heck even 8

I think this story is written even better than the authors first. Hope he keeps writing more.

what did i just read

This got to be the most beautiful way to get back at a fucking bitch wife like Cindy. As for you Cindy......... GOOD FUCKING JOB

A beautiful blend of story and erotic content. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it .

I Will Express Myself With This Few Points Of Mine

* Cindy Deserves What She Is Facing Now She Has Been Too Abusive Funny Calling Edith And Renee A Whore Wonder What She Is

* Mark Seem To Be One Weakling Of A Man I Would Have Divorced Her Rightaway Catching Her Cheating, Even Being Slapped And Ordered Around By A Woman This Would Never Happen In Africa

* Alex To Be Thrown Into The Trash Can Looks Like Something From Tom And Jerry Cartoons

* And Well This Is The First Time I Enjoy Stories With With Dom/sub Theme No That I Like It Though I Only Enjoyed The Part About Cindy's Punishment

* And Overall I Like The Happy Ending I Almost Punched My Screen In Anger At Cindy's Treatment To Mark But Goob Job Keep It Up