All Comments on 'Dead Stick Ch. 02'

The writing is just ... horrible.

Grammar, etc...horrible.

see tittle

I know you're trying to set the stage, but this didn't really seem like a chapter, more like a short interlude to something else.

Also, how on earth did spellcheck not catch "huhndred"? You are using one, right? Even Google Docs has one.

Get fucking real all his stories have been good you want perfect framed go buy a fucking book the authors here do the shit because they like to write loved it keep going

The hell with grammar and spelling! This is an original

Fantastic story.

Thank you!!!

Another site I used to read has a wonderfully approach to this above the comments.

Remember! Review the story, not the author’s grammatical prowess. Not everyone was an English major.

Sometimes I feel this may be told by an unreliable narrator. Jumping slightly due to events either not being important to them, so simple to them it's not worth noting or he wasn't involved. I enjoy that

There was Grammer and spelling errors? I was so enthralled in the story that missed them! This is a very captivating tale.