by babyboo
That's a wonderful way to end a good Halloween. Can't wait to read your next submission.
My first loves name was Tara.
So this set me off in a way that i was thumping.
Im allways going to wonder if this is your true story.
I loved it and enjoyed it alot.
Please please keep writing.
i gave it a 100 the only thing i would change is they both need hairless cunts
Hi I really loved this story, actually I love all your stories, thanks and I can't wait for more of your submissions.
Hauntingly lovely,trickier than the pumpkinest pie,sorry my puns are aweful,really enjoyed it,hope to see/read more when you manage it
...but: "...We squoze our hands together..." ? Where did you find that word, Babyboo? 'Squeezed' perhaps, or 'clutched' or 'grasped', so many other suitable words, anything but 'squoze' which I defy you to find in any dictionary. That apart, an enjoyable story. I hope Trish and Tara enjoyed their night, always assuming that they didn't spend the night in the slammer for wasting police time.