All Comments on 'Deadly Trick... Tasty Treat!'

by babyboo

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RumourRumourover 19 years ago
Happy Halloween...

That's a wonderful way to end a good Halloween. Can't wait to read your next submission.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow

My first loves name was Tara.

So this set me off in a way that i was thumping.

Im allways going to wonder if this is your true story.

I loved it and enjoyed it alot.

Please please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
wow

THat was absolutly fabulas

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
awsome

i gave it a 100 the only thing i would change is they both need hairless cunts

AJAustenAJAustenover 13 years ago
Loved it!!!

Hi I really loved this story, actually I love all your stories, thanks and I can't wait for more of your submissions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
omfg

i cummed reading this story :) great job

fingers46fingers46almost 12 years ago
What a hoot,a truly haunting tale,E.A.Poe would be jealous

Hauntingly lovely,trickier than the pumpkinest pie,sorry my puns are aweful,really enjoyed it,hope to see/read more when you manage it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Enjoyable...

...but: "...We squoze our hands together..." ? Where did you find that word, Babyboo? 'Squeezed' perhaps, or 'clutched' or 'grasped', so many other suitable words, anything but 'squoze' which I defy you to find in any dictionary. That apart, an enjoyable story. I hope Trish and Tara enjoyed their night, always assuming that they didn't spend the night in the slammer for wasting police time.

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