by carsonshepherd
I am absolutely thrilled you continued this story. It shows talent when a tale can be this sexy without any sex happening yet (not that I don't want to read about these two having sex hehe obviously I hope it goes there...)
I read this story first then I went to all the others. Hun, I don't know where you've been hiding yourself or why i havn't picked you up yet but I have your author screen on bookmark now baby!!! There is nothing more than I love than a good stud on stud story. ESPECIALLY when the story is written with DEPTH. It makes the sex sooooooo much hotter.(Not to mention how it "inspires" me, lol) Do keep on writing please.
wow! this stuff is really really sexy... not to mention well-written and suspenseful. keep up the great work! :)
All of your stories have a mix of sensuality and reality - your Christmas entry is stunning - but this Dear Diary series is my favorite. I can feel the innocent yearning and the primal hunger from start to finish, as well as the pure fun and delight of discovery and the angst that comes along with it. Thanks, Carson; terrific writing.
This was so hot! I could really feel where he was coming from, literally!The whole thing had me begging Travis to either give it to him or just leave him alone. Keep up the great work!
Although stories about football don't do much for me, and I can't relate to having a crush on a jock, this is a good "you are there" presentation that rings true. Looking forward to future installments!
"Bitch. So delicious I could lick you all over like a cherry vanilla ice cream cone ..."
What more can one say? A laughing, half-wry half-camp look at the 80's boy in love. I loved it.
...it's so hot and the lead is so well written that I'm really starting to feel sorry for him. He's so God damned frustrated and with good reason! I'm off to read 4 now. :D
I like this story. If you think it's boring dinkyboots, don't read it. Quit being lame and let others enjoy the story.