All Comments on 'Dear Helen'

Beautiful story. Thank you

it was flawless!

Very interesting story!

5

So lovely to read quiet, intimate sex like this. TY

Wonderful. A great talent for writing about the slow burn of yearning over the passage of time.

What a lovely piece of loving, sexy writing! I so appreciate you bringing a story to this category where *both* partners are mature. Like the tags say "November November." And the way you build the characters is so skilful, fine details that reveal so much about each of them and their relationship. And the sex is so warm and satisfying.

Tender and intimate. We can all appreciate moments like this, and who doesnt have that ONE very special 'what if ' wish? Building bridges, EB... it's what you do...build bridges to the past, bridges that lead to a future that's different that anything we ever imagined. And you inspire others to build their own... Thank you.

Such a beautifully written story, everything screamed 5* . The characters, the sex, the whole thought out scenario. But I don't feel warm, or contented, I feel empty, even quite sad, why did they have to part forever, you could have left it open, left us wondering. Is what you did, is that what great author's do with their besotted followers.

Lovely! Intimate! 6 stars!

My second reading, so well written, but I feel just as empty and sad that I did 8 months ago (see comments)