All Comments on 'Death's New Bride'

She just looked into his eyes and orgasm?? O_o "In a moment he had swooped to her side and pulled her into the chariot beside him. As she looked up into his dead grey eyes her body contracted into thunderous orgasm and she fainted into his arms." etc etc

I enjoyed reading your story.

Thank you.

Interesting take on Hades choosing brides despite having Persephone as his wife. Liked your description of the underworld. A bit more background about Alyssa's ties to witchcraft/Druidism would have made the beginning clearer. Thanks for sharing with us.

I ... am not feeling it at all. Don't get me wrong. It's not a bad story. It's just not to my personal tastes. Keep writing, though.