All Comments on 'Deception!'

Loved the story-within-a-story - well done!

I had to give it a “1”

The scheme to gain revenge failed almost completely Crumm didn’t live long enough after discovering the truth - if he ever did

The story seemed to go on forever - and with very little variety - just plain old butt fucking.

The only deception practiced was upon the reader

OK, so no non consensual sex and the revenge was two whole sentences?

Are you sure you understand the meaning of words?

A fine story told about friends with similar tastes. The bi-weekly exercises and stories or poems gave a purpose to the group and allowed for the mutual pleasures of each party. The story he told was happy/sad/happy and pleased the group and those of us lucky enough to find this tale. Thank you.

4, I enjoyed it. Kinda wish it had stuck with either time period rather then being a story with-in a story. Was wondering how there was going to be some revenge and for what reason for the literary group but then they just became non-characters. Did appreciate the girl Eliza wasn't destroyed by the revenge.

What a great story to read, at the end i had forgotten it was a story inside a story, as the tale was written so well