by eroslit
This is a great story told in a slow yet erotic manner. You were able to hold the reader's interest in what was going to happen even tho the pace was on the slow side (for erotic literature).
The description of the scenes as well as the sexual encounters are well done. I will definitely read more of your work. Well done, bravo!
I think that you've just turned me into a lesbian, which will be difficult to explain to my wife... but she will certainly appreciate it!
Great dialogue and verbal imaging. Now I need to read parts 1 and 2!
I waited until I had finished the three chapters before I gave you the thanks and compliments you deserve. Wonderful writing!
I have really enjoyed this series and I hope there will be more chapters. I hope you write more stories on other themes as well. Smile!
Warm brilliance beyond simple titilation. Simple Hetro male respect your way
This tale has so much potential. I wish you would carry on the story line