All Comments on 'De'Ja'Vu'

This author knows how to write pleasant character, erotic moments and twist the plot!

It was a fun piece to write, so I am delighted you enjoyed it. And I am glad that you enjoyed the fantasy and adventure along with the "twist".

MF

Its a really good story. nice twist to it. I just wish there was another where he confronts her. I also interested to see how you would continue it.

Where's the end! Can't leave guy hanging like that.

just wanting a good fuck the last bit was a surprise about the family run lodge and even more of a surprise was that Melinda had set up all the other women to find out if he was good in bed...at least he got to enjoy them but a very surprising ending....should have continues until he fucked Melinda.....finishes all too soon without really saying what was what......

MF, you're always the best - love your description of Angela n Janice , Melinda not bad....but oh A n J ..... I'll take them off your hands n suck their tits n eat their cunts then fuck them from behind anytime n all the time.

Yukimi

Loved the deja vue idea for this. I would love to see it continued!

I enjoy it so far but where's the rest of it??? You can't just leave us "HANGING" like that, cum on now!!