All Comments on 'Den of Iniquity Ch. 01'

Sir Nathan does not fail to disappoint in the start of what promises to be an exciting work. While nothing obvious is contained in this first chapter, He has set it up very well and hints at what is to come.

Woven tightly, the tale of the clerk will be an interesting one to follow and I, for one, will be watching for the subsequent chapters.

All this girl asks, Sir Nathan, is that it pours from your pen in a timely manner.

Wow, what a great intro. As for your little comment on the top; some of us prefer a little plot to our story I know I do. You never do seem to dispoint. I have read almost everything you have posted, and it's been a blast.

Faerymist

I do hope you continue this... it's a real gem! Very excited to read more... most of all, I like the chemistry between the characters.

i actually loved chapter 1......and am looking forward to the rest of Your story...i too, like many readers, enjoy getting to know the characters and so Sir....this one was intrigued enough to want more.....*s* thank You

sadie

Even as the beginning of character development O/one can see the Dom in Roger.

i most certainly can. As a slave with sadistic tendencies i am most appreciative of a confident Dominant. Male or female for that matter. Chantelle is a pleasure and i am looking forward to 'seeing' more of Her!

Thank You so very much for sharing this story.

catie

Excellent intro, looking forward the the next chapter with anticipation, well done Sir N.

ineffable i would say, since extremely impressed and appreciative just doesn't seem to cut it. please keep writing!

As a woman on my own quest to learn about my submissive side, I thoroughly enjoyed ready about a man's journey to find his dominant side....I look forward to reading the rest!

Steph

As you said, no actually sex yet, but You know it's coming. Can't wait.

wow what a great start to a story cant wait to read the next chapter

Just finished reading the first chapter. It totally hooked me from the start. Off to the others !!!

Wonderfully descriptive and great dialog. Roger reminds me of myself on some distant level.

a very pleasurable story!

They don't produce anything. They are just ticks and leeches upon society.

While intriguing, anyone that throws 20,000$ at a party is just ridiculously irresponsible with their company's bank account.

i like this one. i prefer stories about female subs, but its ever the more intriging because not only is he male but he is in a very demanding job....its very empowering to read

snicerely distance

I can't wait to read on. I love the lifestyle and everything about it. Look forward to rewarding comments from me!!

I am loving the whole series. REALLLLY!!! I would love you to write books if you havent already.....I cant stop reading ;) Thank you for knowing and writing my fantasies...

Your writing style is amazing. I really felt drawn into the story. Keep it coming!

A fantastic start to a story and I look forward to finding out much more.

I believe the quote for this is

'tasteful, but provocative'

i love your stories, i hope i'm not up all night reading them

Easy to read, gripping. I will certainly have to read the rest now!

I have a few favorite series' on this site, and I have read them so many times I need another story to get addicted to. Dominique is one of my top two favorites on the site. Once you find an author that is a true gem, there is no going back. I look forward to seeing this story unfold, as I have the utmost confidence in your work. :) Now to chapter two!

Can't wait to read more, you certainly know how to draw a reader in. What a magnificent way to unwind from a rather harrowing day.

More, please, SN

-a

Looking forward to reading the rest

Not only an interesting start, but well written as well... looking forward to the rest of the story :)

Color me a fan... MJB

Sir Nathan,

Your writing holds me captive. I eagerly begin the next chapter. Thank you.

Your stories, Sir. You are a talented writer.

i wish i could read more!

i hope You are able to return and write, Sir!

Yes it also is very great story very captavating i loved it Sir please keep the story going

Your writing is absolutely fantastic! Thank you Sir may i have another.

Only thru chapter one and can't wait to read how it all plays out. Well developed characters with enough mystery to keep me wondering what happens next. Good plot so far, and a twist, very nice.

Thank you

So far? Nice...!

MVF_Lit

I recall reading this story some time ago, with a very different ending at Chapter 11. I like this better, much better.

I’ve definitely seen this one somewhere else, and I think I know where.

Excellent chapter 1, looking forward to continuing the journey into your story.