by Sir_Nathan
I still firmly believe this would make for a lovely novella for bedside reading.
Bravo Sir Nathan!
as always i am left hanging on the edge of my seat waiting for the next bit..i agree it would make a great novel..would be one of thoose brillant ones you stayed up till dawn reading becasue you couldnt put it down
thank You as always for sharing it
best wishes..mijoya
As with the rest of Your works, this one has me in knots (impish grin). i have to agree that i, too, cannot wait to see what happens at this party...the intrigue, combined with the eroticism of the whole situation would definitely make a wonderful page turner.
~anxiously awaiting the next chapter!~
I always wondered how to go about a punishment, and this has helped hugely. This whole story is incredible. So well written, so rivetting and so friggin sexy.
I cant wait for the next chapter.
So well done.
Steve
Den of Iniquity is truely one of the most well thought out stories i have read to date. The character and plot development are unmatched. i can't wait to read what happens next!
Thank you Nathan, as always, I enjoyed it thoroughly. I love your descriptions of the developing Dom's mind, and your treatment of the whole situation. Looking forward to the plot continueing, and of course, more sex!
--Bitch
Please send the next one out soon! Your writing amazes me. Thankyou for sharing it!
Oh his firm hand has me delightfully excited. Another round well done, SN.
-a
Sir Nathan, You are a masterful teller of stories. I am enjoying this story so very much. I was wishing it were me being "corrected" like Annie. I am so happy that I found this story once you had already finished it. I would not be able to take the waiting for the next chapters. Thank you.
..of my seat!! I can't stop reading!! I have days where I have to take breaks from You, i spend almost all my free time reading!! Your writing is superb. I wonder how this story will end!!