All Comments on 'Descend to Heaven'

A marvellous start to what I am quite sure will be a major story. Thank you, five stars, and have a Happy Holiday!

You have a rare combination of a dirty mind and a fine grasp of writing. Please give us more of this pleasure...

It was wonderfully complicated and hot.

Fantastic story welcome back. You are one of my favourite writers

You're stories may be fiction but there's truth weaved throughout the story. People who don't understand this world tend to simplify it with remarks like kinky or it's just rough sex. But it isn't that at all is it? It's letting out the emotional pain that we hide away from ourselves and others by submitting to the physical pain at the hands of someone just like ourself. Looking forward to reading what's to come.

Dr.,

I'd nearly given up looking for new submissions from you! After seeing this new post from you I had no choice but to take a break from Christmas shopping and read the entire story sitting in my car at the mall ; )

I don't know how you do it, what you have that moves me in the most wonderful of ways. You know, I suppose, and that can't help but make itself clear in your work. Thank you, and please, please, please do continue...

I thought you wouldn't write anymore, I'm so glad you did. I enjoy your stories and I am looking forward to the next installment.

But I can only give you a five for this. The scale doesn't go any higher. :(

You have a rare gift, and we are so lucky to have another opportunity to share in it. Your style of writing, skill at weaving a story, and insights into human nature (even beyond those relating to dominance and submission) all shine bright in this first chapter. Eagerly looking forward to the next.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us again...so refreshing to read your work and most definitely look forward to more.

fuck luck, chuck..

write FAST, that is what i wish you.

;p

it is so good to have you writing again, dr_mabeuse. seeing your author name showing up next to an all new story drew some serious fangirl-type squeals from me - just before i started hyperventilating, that is! ;-D

this first chapter was everything i expected it to be. can't wait for the next one!

Having just read the title, by the time I'd finished, quite flushed and wanting more, seeing the author's name, it all made sense. More please, Sir.

It's wonderful to see a new story from you, Doctor, and this one does not disappoint. Your use of language is more seductive than any other author I have read. It's late and I should go to bed. I should. But I know I won't be able to sleep until I have read the next chapter.

Like your flow, the reminders, the poetry, the plainness, the carefully crafted sense of openness.

Looking forward to reading the rest over the next few days.

Thank you.

-Hh

I love your characters so much. I can't wait to read more. I don find it a little strange that he went from biochemist to mastroleger, but it works for the story. and I do understand he doesnt "believe" in astrolagy pe

I like your writing style greatly. Echoes of reality shape your fantasies. thank you

... for this beautiful story about the awakening of Ana as a submissive.

Fanny x

AMAZING.

I truly feel like I've been transported when I read your stories.

Mediocre poker.

What a masterpiece! You are the undisputed Shakespeare of erotica! Wow! You're my hero!

Soooo hot 🥵

Good premise.

Sex is somewhat rushed. Too automatic. All one way -- she does nothing to/for/with him.

Needed to slow down.

Needed more details.

Needed more actionn from her.

Four stars.