All Comments on 'Desire Awakened'

I wrote this story about six years ago and it was my first attempt at erotica. I thought I'd share it along with the others I've submitted here. Hope you like it. :)

one of the hottest storys I've ever read in the category! And by hottest I mean HOTTEST.....I'm going to read some of your other storys now

Quite amazing for a first attempt in the genre.

You are an amazing writer. I love how you write things that are not over-used and yet are still familiar, and make such an art of it. Well done, and I sincerely hope you continue to contribute work to this site!

oh my gosh!!! you are an amazing writer! you should write a book or something, ive read soem stories in here, there were tons of sex and well you know... but this one is the best!!!!!! pls write more! i need a chapter 2 pls pls pls!

The classification for this riveting story was 'Toys and Masturbation".

Did the so expert brother rate as a masturbatory toy.

OK I'm being a bit humourus

Wow. Great premise, nice detail, not outlandish and harsh.....well done! Thank you for your efforts, and keep 'em coming (so to speak....hahahahah)....I can only hope to have a similar episode with my OWN sister-in-law! (unlikely, but hey! That's why they're called fantasy!) Thanks for sharing!

some work - thanks! Had to re-read this right away just to imbed it thoroughly!

What a great story, it begs for a follow up when she turns her husband on with her change in attitude... Please come back to the story telling.

What a great story, thank you very much.

It's been a long time since you wrote this tale and it is still memorable. It comes from the female point of view and sounds real, not a guys imagenings, and that is what makes it so erotic. I wish more wives would read this to understand how being a good girl isn't what a husband/lover wants in his live. Now I have to read more of your stories.

Great story...well written, highly erotic. Expected a different ending, but it ended exactly as it should have.

Had a very similar experience with a friend's wife. Surprised both of us actually...never spoken of again. I did taste her fingers though. Always wondered what she was thinking, you gave me some insight.

Thanks for sharing.

Love your stories.. not sure if you still writing either..but I always wished she ended up with the brother! I think you should write a sequel of her ending up with the brother because her husband was cheating on her! Lol but live all your stories!

That’s it I need jack I will be top of that list to take care of him

Outstanding, thanks