All Comments on 'Desperate Measures'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
The puns, the puns!

A clever story, and with a bit more editing could be even better.

We had a Hillman Hunter when I was growing up. They're notorious for having problems in the clutch department, so it wasn't at all surprising when you made Hillman (l)Imp :-)

ag2507ag2507over 15 years ago
Made me laugh...

though perhaps it belongs in humour and satire. Though the less than beautiful ford anglia didn't quite do it for me; desperately tried to fit anglia to her maiden name. But I think that would have been too hard. Perhapd Morris Oxford might have worked better. Tried playing with sunbeam Talbot oo, but it didn't work - though it did, i think, have the same frame as the hillman.

Badge engineeting. But then where were the reciprocating pistons?

A

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
She could have called the baby MG

A nice little story and I liked reading it very much.Thanks for the story....Rich

oldwayneoldwayneover 15 years ago
Nice, light, humorous...

Another good tale. Thanks for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
If the baby had been a girl...

she'd have been a real Minx

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
No Elise?

Not bad except for the names of vehicles used instead of proper names which made me want to get in my Mercedes and take her for a ride!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Too Cute

Was this a Matchless Triumph? Only the Black Shadow knows.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
to jumpy

you left alot out like at the beach one second they are in the car then suddenly by magic they are on the beach and screwing where'd the car go did they jump out while driving way to rushed slow down and make sure you transition between scenes properly AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE POSTING

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
ha

read it with a smile

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchover 10 years ago

Anglia Ford, Ford Anglia. Punny. She's a gold digger.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
got the motors running

bit of a fun story based on old cars.....but what about a bentley or rolls....

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
got the right title...DESPERATE

BIGGEST LOAD OF CRAP EVER...

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