All Comments on 'Destined Hearts Ch. 03'

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kydreamrkydreamrabout 18 years ago
A very cute and enjoyable story

I liked the character development most. Going from not so happy memories to a budding romance between social opposites was a good idea, and the addition of the "ghost bar" added an unexpected twist.

Nice writing!

peggytwittypeggytwittyabout 18 years ago
Wonderful, romantic and erotic

Thank you for a great story

looking forward to your next story

DesertPirateDesertPirateabout 18 years ago
Very Good!

A great Valentines story. I hope you have many more in the future. I WILL read them all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I so so loved it

to me that was so romantic I love love loved it. I couldn't stop reading it. I could see it all in my head and it was so fantastic. I really really enjoyed it

Marines_Lady_15Marines_Lady_15over 16 years ago
Yay! So cute!!

This little series was great!

msjay123msjay123about 16 years ago
???

what happend to the rest of the story??

MoogPlayerMoogPlayerabout 15 years ago
Beautiful!

I absolutely loved it, the whole series.

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago

That was a really good twist. I liked it alot. It made the story unique. I love it.

arrowglassarrowglassover 7 years ago
What a surprise GREAT ending!

A terrific tall tale!!!

twoebtwoebabout 7 years ago
Kinda want more

Lol loved it just want more. Want to know how they get narried and such but great story loved tge ending actually.

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