All Comments on 'Destined Hearts Ch. 08'

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josranvictorjosranvictorover 5 years ago
THE BEST STORY EVER...WELL I THOUGHT LUIDANS,ADRIANICK,GEOHENRY,RAMARCUS AND CHRIGUELL WERE THE COMPETITORS BUT I SWEAR PRAVEEN OF " PRANTONIO OR ANTONAVEEN"IS GONNA BEAT THEM ALL

Ts the D.H reign man and I just don't care about anything else...........I bet someone who saw me reading the scene where Antonio and Bruce shot the photos would instantly go emotional I swear,,,man I was DAMN DISAPPOINTED AND GRIEF STRICKEN and Vanalas just made matters worse when he said praveen was looking lyk A ZOMBIE!!!!!! Ouch that hurt me lyk,I cud see praveen looking puzzled man,,,i swear I was about to cry....the way Antonio stared at Bruce, the pouses,the fucking contact between them,man how they smiled,how they rejoiced about praveen not coming.... How easy t was for Antonio to adjust to praveen's absence man I was hurt as fuck.....I expected much 4rm him at least but man the guy z so annoying as fuck,I was totally depressed and sad untilllllllllll..............,..VIOLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

josranvictorjosranvictorover 5 years ago
THE NEW BULL CAME IN....HOHOHOHOHOH SO HOT LYK NICK AND ANTONIO,HANDSOME LYK LUIS AND MESMERIZED LYK HENRY AND CHRIS

Am talking about Santiago Lopez, love!!!!!!!!! ยก!!! I swear this guy has made my day,hmmmmmmmmm new Antonio better watch out because trust me,HE IS GONNA BE JEALOUSY HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHSHSA,AND I CANT WAIT FOR THAT,,,oh oh am wanting each and every sec of this,...I swear I can see Antonio hypnotized and horny and.....did he just ask if that was praveen??????? Well handsome,ts praveen and he better buckle his belt tightly or else the bulge will make it loooooooosssseeeeeeee,hehehehehehege oh fuck am on cloud nine now,I swear praveen and Miguel just gave the best week oh oh fuck me and hehehe welcome to the prantonio world Mr Santiago,u have so many discoveries to exhibit esp to Antonio... Things are reversed now uhmmmm THE COMPETITION Z ONNNNNNNNNNNNN..HOHOHOHO

josranvictorjosranvictorover 5 years ago
Man....at least today Antonio's other side is shown!!!

Hell yah did u see how he wanted to embrace praveen after the laptop issue???? How Eduardo reacted and that guilt on Tony's faceman gave chills,how sad he was and attached he felt man....I can say ummmmmm that I request more of thus side and he z lykly to make a good husband to our praveen and yah he z gentle u kno and,wait.....hahaha how did u see how praveen snapped at This pig Emma hehehe the woman z hard to contain lyk avomit...now why did she interfere in our laptop issues huh??? So foolish and tarbulalarsa anyway wat to do,we have apig that has refused asty...we have to wait until t goes back oh God.........did u guys see how he snapped at Bruce????? After the photo shoot hahahahahaha he took each of them with such ease and left them broken and in mendable THATS MY BOY SHOW THEM THE BOSS HERE,,,HUH THOSE PUPPETS,DIE IN HELL BITCHES

josranvictorjosranvictorover 5 years ago
THE FUCKING SHOWER SCENE GOT ME LYK OHHHH FUUUUUCK ME

Do u kno wat,Antonio at times make me wonder ways wrong with h today he's smiling,2moro rude and harsh. ....,...I even wonder f at all wat he claims to have no feelings for praveen is true and that's wat makes Destined hearts different.... Ts been un predictable and still z....did u guys see how Antonino pulled praveen with him???? How their bodies connected the whole shower scene, how he undressed before praveen, Cud he be hiding that he's lusting after praveen????? Well am just asking but I think this z the most wonderful chapter of D.H SO FAR,fyn chapter 7was gud but this z the best........man I have to read again for lyk 8times oh God,oh God.........am in love fuck I thought we were done in this scene of Antonio's magazine,that question 4rm mum abt Prav not appearing on the magazine but hmmmmm praveen saved us...oh don't expect me to comment on that magazine of Antonio and whoever coz I DONT LYK IT PERIOD,,and I wish I cud have praveen and Santiago's cover photo and hey.....praveen z Antonio's not any other person though HE HAS TO PAY

josranvictorjosranvictorover 5 years ago

Theme song breathless by shyne ward and only girl in the world by riri + so beautiful by Chris de Burg plz post soon my king(TCKOW or TKHS ) Do u remember those titles?????? Challenge, need an answer

.....,........pllzzzz plzzzzz and plzzzzzz post soon my boy please vanalas,,,hohoho and iron rose is hot also ....FUCK ME

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Wow. I'm starting to like the story. And damn, Praveen's character development is blowing my mind. Serves Antonio fucking Gonzales right.

mfa607mfa607over 5 years ago

Two steps forward one step back. I hope this is the beginning of Praveen moving forward completely! Great chapter! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Please don't take too long posting the next chapter!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
great chapter

finally, the long wait was over..nice chapter indeed..anticipating so very much for the next update. thank you much mr. vanalas...well, the fight is on!

The_VampirePrinceThe_VampirePrinceover 5 years ago
Yes. Yes. Yes

I love this story so much it feels like i'm destined to read it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Pliz be fast on yr next chapter. M dying waiting for it

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow

This is amazing I can't wait for another chapter. Plz post soon oh my god I love this story in every sense of the word!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
And Antonio Finally Sees Praveen

Big revelation, very dramatic, lovely reveal. Antonio finally sees Praveen. I loved how it was a photo shoot with someone else that showed Antonio who Praveen really was. Only seeing Praveen through someone else's eyes could cut through all of Antonio's preconceptions.

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