All Comments on 'Destined Hearts Ch. 09'

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josranvictorjosranvictorabout 5 years ago
THE BEST CHAPTER FROM THIS STORY SO FAR AND STINKINGKY THE MOST ENJOYED TO ME

HAhaha things i have noticed from "Destined hearts reign",ts one of those stories from Vanalas that have reigned for so long ( after Iron rose/LA don/wild flower/Chriguell ),the first story of a male character with a negative mind to the 7th chapter(remember Unbroken??,Luidans united in the 5th chapter),a story of many contradictions and the first story to dethroned another from the same writer......trust me Destined hearts leads Iron rose now

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 5 years ago
AM IN LOVE WITH ANTONIO AND SANTIAGO.......... HAHAHAHA LET PRAVEEN MAKE 'EM FIGHT

If we r to receive such reactions from Antonio then keep writing some scenes from this chapter hahaha I loved how the guy waited at the gate,how he was so dreadful, how he stormed out of that room Gosh yeah yeah YEAH fuck me....the way he stared at Santiago, that ragefilled glance... FUCK TGAT STARE AT PRAVEEN GOT ME SHOOTING IN MA PANTS fuck the guy z handsome, I can see His face the moment he looked at the waist-holding pic,the almost kissing pic hahahahahaha and the hahaha the foot-horny pic......God Antonio was hurt and I loved it and we have him,I swear we have him..... WE HAVE U ANTONIO

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 5 years ago
BITCH OFF OUR MAN

So where was Bruce all along,I thought he z aood talker why didn't he scream huh???? NOW HELLO ANTONIO Z OURS I swear even the way he was grabbing Praveen's hand was romantic and nerve wrecking,the way he quarrelled shown love man am now jealousy at Praveen but yap,NOW TS OUR TURN TO HURT,Praveen is innocently hurting and torturing the guy but he can't see it (bitch use ur four eyes c'mon),.,,......Owwwwwww there is this...

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 5 years ago
THIS.... "U're mine" part hoooooooohoooo,trust me it feels so gud,so damn gud and jealousy-bringing

U have afucking wedding ring on afucking wedding finger.......I own you....you belong to me """ U'RE MINE"""" FUCK FUCK FUCK am on the planet top hahaha walai t feels so gud being claimed especially by Antonio Gonzalez walalalala oh my GOD,how he was so apologetic after hurting Praveen God,..I v never seen him lyk this also eeeeeeeh plz Can make him yearn,let him pay let him kneel oooih yeah,Bruce,Emma,Andrea plz die coz soon just soon WE R GETTING THE MAN SOOOOON AND AINT ANY THING U'll do FUCK U ALLLLLL .

Actually no way Santiago has to end up with that cheat hell no,no,no at least Ethan and Santiago but no way Andrea aaah aaah

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 5 years ago
Ammmmmm

My theme song for this is "you'll always be my baby" by Maria Carey

And I feel it coming by the weekend,..........am hot now so hot let me find a solution but ANTONIO U'RE WEAK NOW,

Thank u sooooooo much My prince for the best moment of my day thank u soooooo soooo my CROWNED KING OF WRITERS I don't rush u but post soon my love plz plz I can't wait please Van

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 5 years ago

Fuck let me read t again

mfa607mfa607about 5 years ago

Great chapter! Loved the end the most! The evil bitch deserves some hell! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
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Your update is all I think of since last 2 months... please have mercy 🙏😕

4agoodtimecall4agoodtimecallalmost 5 years ago
Please move it along!

Great story! At 9 chapters in now, Antonio should at least nuzzle Praveen. I'm disappointed there hasn't even been a kiss yet. The perfect time was when Antonio first claimed him, by telling him, "You are mine."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Chapter 10 please!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Pliz update chapter 10 pliz

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
chapter 10 🥺

I love this story and check every week for an update. I’ve read all your stories and really like them. I can’t wait for chapter 10!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
You still writing

It's been like 5 months and you haven't posted. Are you still active Vanalas.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Please you update very soon dear vanalas

We all miss prantonio

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Hey guys he hasn't posted in like 6 months. I think vanalas has stopped writing.

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