All Comments on 'Detained & Defiled'

What a deep seated hatred for women you have. Some of this shit you write is unbelieveable. I guess it's better you write it than take it to the streets. What a sick fuck.

not worth the time it took to read the first paragraph. Do you really think of women the way you picture and portray them.

Can you spell F a n t a s y? But, if it makes you feel better, be critical, dog-gone-ya!

Great start, good possibilities but half way through part 1 lost the story line.

Maybe you could do another story about the entire family when they got home and if they changed ?

i found it really distracting that the names of the women were getting changed around so, was hard to pay attention to the story line when i had to figure out if you were talking about mother or daughter.

I think it could use a little editing, but I liked it. The story was pretty fast-paced, maybe slow it down a little next time and add more details about the sex everyone was having? :) I LOVE that it had a happy ending too, you don't see that very much in these kinds of stories, LOL.

The ending needs some work, way too quick of a conclusion.

Where was the sexy part. First page "He stuck his penis in her pussy." Not erotic, no good description. Stopped reading om first page. Just mean and gratuitous meaness.