All Comments on 'Detective Bobby Morgan's Case'

by Perja

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Well planned story

More about an investigation and the risks of a growing relationship between a couple of cops. But a good read, and fun.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
favorite author

You are one of my favorite authors. I look forward to whatever you write. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Some tale Perja!

One of the best-written pieces I have ever read here. A real story, so good the sex was just an afterpiece for me. You are good, very good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Simply amazing

Perja,

You should be making a living writing for the screen or TV. The most talent I have ever read on this site.

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenabout 16 years ago
Fantastic.

Give it a bit of a back story, stretch it out and you could make a damn fine novel out of this. Great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
a great & fun read

The title says it all. The characters were sassy and believable. I'm just wondering why it's in the 'mature' category. It appeared to me that the girl is in her late 20s or early 30s, and the guy is in his 40s. Not exactly a May-Dec love affair. Maybe it should have been in Er.C or Romance? Oh well, that's just me nitpicking. Good writing and hope to read more from you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very Impressive Author

As someone else said - this could be a snippet of a longer piece that anyone with any literary sense would appreciate.<P>

Now you have forced me to - read your others. Nice problem - I hope.<P>

Author - you are appreciated for on top of the talent displayed, when you give respect you get it back many times over. This was credible and well told.<P>

With High Regard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great story

I also wasn't sure why it was in the Mature category (maybe an error?), but in the end, it didn't matter. It was a great read, very believable dialogue, growing attraction, and a very steamy and passionate ending. Loved it.

LEKarchnerLEKarchnerover 11 years ago
At Last...

This was an extremely well thought out and executed story! I really became totally involved in what was happening / unfolding in each and every paragraph. Thank you very much for a very enjoyable couple of hours living in Detective Bobby Morgan's world. I look forward to more of the same. Thank you

stewartbstewartbover 1 year ago

Great experience ... arresting right to the end.

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