by HeyAll
Special thanks to MindyStarr and ExSoCalLaw for their feedback.
As always, I hope you've all enjoyed this.
Heyall
One of the things I enjoy about your detective stories is they're sexy and fun to read. There is also a modern day Philip Marlowe feel to them. Tough & determined. Looking forward to the next one.
Being in a situation where she has to go along to get what she wants -- that got to me. Good job.
The story was well put together, tightly written, and enjoyable from start to finish. You forgot to mention whether or not the police arrested the madam? I suppose this was inspired by Jeffrey Epstein, right? Five stars from me.
Just discovered this today. Very concise, neatly packaged, extremely suspenseful, and definitely enjoyable. Very well written, edited, punctuated, excellent workmanship. Smacks of Miami Vice. Can you make it a series?