All Comments on 'Detective on Naked Display'

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About as good as it gets. 5*

What could improve this story? More of it. I was surprised you didn’t add anything about a second visit to the computer room and her reaction when she discovered her colleagues had been voyeurs. But I did enjoy it even though no one was killed! 🙄😂

Love the story, brilliant as usual! Another easy 5 ⭐️. I think a good touch would have been to emphasise to the guy who was probing her identity (sorry not sorry 😉) that he was only aloud to look but not touch because he’d been so rude. Instead of repeating the “don’t question my integrity“ comment. Loved that her soon to be ex colleagues were all drooling.

Thanks for sharing Tess (UK)

A good read ... i don't think Raymond Chandler or Dashiell Hammett could have done better