by Mostera1
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What a fitting chapter to this saga. Such a beautiful story. The scene with the box too funny.
I have been enjoying this very unique story and am looking forward to the next chapter. I tried to vote but the voting system is down, will keep trying.
I am thoroughly enjoying this story, I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the good work.
What a delightfully different romance. The dog and the squirrel was well done, I am curious too, what that scene means. The vacumn cleaner was funny. Your characters are so real. You are their tour guide! Can't wait!
Cute & sensitive story. Please write another chapter with them making love and having hot sex. I am sure Lynn has a thin cock and Sam has amazing pussy muscles!
Your writing style would prduce a very errotic story indeed.
I really like the story line, love with a very unique twist. I like the complexity of the characters. They seem very real and very believable. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you.
I labled my comment the way I did because if this was labled gay or lebian I most likely would of not even opened the first chapter. I too was fooled when Sam turned out to be a woman. As the chapters unfolded I found myself really liking the characters and hoping they find their own special relationship and find and make love.
A very fine job
I would never have even thought of approaching a romance story from this angle. It's VERY interesting. Please continue.
How clever your use of ring tones. That's Sam by Olivia NJ.
You must have done a lot of research with this story. I have to reread the first chapters and see what I else missed. Wonderful job.
I wondered how you were going to get them in the same house. This is perfect. The accident solved the problem and will give them time to adjust to each other in a non-threatening way as they move into a guy/gal relationship. I think, so far, this is the best chapter.
I just discovered your story it is so intriguing. Initially when I read chapter one I though boy girl discord Valentine Day.....yadah yadah yadah. Boy was I initially surprise when I though you allowed a man hit a woman regardless of how much of bitch she was being. It was simply wrong, like a previous reader I thought it was time to look for another story. The only problem I couldn't stop reading your story. I am so glad I didn't......wow!!! I loving the development of the friendship and their latent awareness of their physical attraction to the opposite sex......who would have thought it possible. Although my all time favorite thus far is when Lynn compared tasting a woman pussy to that of rank can tuna. Girl I was howling and I am at work. This is hilarious. I can't wait to finish the series.
This is a lovely story
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