by RSchwuler
Good one!
Now we need to know how far the life turned upside down for our hero(in?)... Very good work however, keep it on please.
Really liked this story -- raw and animalistic, the way sex should be.
Huge fan of this story! I love the romantic side of it plus the animalistic sex.. hope you keep this up..
I love this story! The total domination is really hot, plus I have a crush on a girl named Kara, hehe. Dougie should call her up and let her know he's pussy-free now. :)
MFin AMAZING!!!...I write this with my best regards. I just want to say this is my first to comment on a story. From beginning to end: well written, I was fully engaged!!! Hope there's more to come!🤗
I like the domination, but I LOVE the romance and care at the end. It wasn't cartoonishly over the top in cruelty. I don't get why this one is nonconsent but the first one, which is way worse irt that, isn't.
Great storytelling! I did like how big and dominant Duff was. However, right to the end the relationship felt tainted by how much he belittled Dougie. Even after Duff said he was sweet on him—which was not a casual thing to say—and even with the small, loverly touches throughout (kissing, nibbling, marking him, stroking his hair, etc.,) that made me want to believe Duff actually did all of this because he felt something for Dougie, I couldn’t shake the feeling that his methods were so emotionally and physically abusive that no sign of romance could be real.
Duff beat Dougie up. Yes, he held back and could have done far more damage, but the fact remains he managed to split this guy’s lip open while humiliating him publicly. Then there was the incessant verbal abuse.
I understand some people are turned on by someone being told that they’re weak, not a real man, should be someone’s woman, etc. It’s such a complete mind fuck though—as opposed to a gradual seduction into or encouragement to explore the feminine—it’s a huge hurdle to believe that romantic feelings exist for the person on the receiving end.
Also, while it felt too fast for Dougie to be so subdued in less than two days, thank you so much for having him question if he really believed his own responses to Duff. I hope fervently that you will expand this story giving Dougie more room to question Duff’s intent and methods, and allowing for ways for him to circumvent the overwhelm of Duff’s dominance and control (multiple tracking apps 👀) in order to sort his own feelings. There cannot be anything good about being steamrolled and bullied into a relationship, to feel that the pleasure of willingly giving yourself to someone was absolutely nullified.
Please let Dougie provide enough resistance mentally and emotionally (because he can’t win physically) to make Duff realize he actually has to prove himself as a man—which requires much more than being able to physically overpower someone—in order to win a complete submission from Dougie.
Thank you so much for sharing your work!