All Comments on 'Did It For The Team'

Very hott session punctuated by a bit of dominance/submission

A combination of humorous and hot. Would love to see more

Are the swimmers clean shaven as so many are? Or are the dark and swarthy ones sporting a hairy chest? Dave and Kent should at least show the remnants of some body hair, maybe even some chest hair? I've seen pix of high school and college swim teams, and not every swimmer shaves his body hair.

Well done. Stunning. Love to act this out

Dave and I both were completely shaved, as most swimmers did on the team. Kent had trimmed hair but he used a buzzer so he had some slight hair on his chest and on his legs, I could feel some of it on his thighs and right by his lower abdomen where my head was resting.

Nice first submission to Literotica. Clearly this is not your first story and hopefully won't be your last. Thanks again.

always nice to read a story about guys in speedos. It's sort of a coming of age story when a young man gets made into a first time cock-sucker. I hope you have more stories regarding you guys in speedos perhaps having one with a multiple men Massage. massage in speedos go together very nicely when you get to see that bulge get bigger.

Excellent set up and flow. Just enough character description to give the readers a good image. Fantastic build up and paced well. Great hot sex. Just one thing...watch your editing when submitting your next one. There were a couple grammatical errors and a missing word here and there, but nothing so serious as to hurt the overall story. Welcome to the author's club and bring on the next one! jkd

Great hot story about swimmers. Always a good setting. Heed the comments from J Kendall Dane. He is a great writer. The small grammatical errors do take away a bit for some of us. But good work and look forward to the next chapter.

I loved it... going to chapter 2!

so erotic! always l love speedo action and you sure got it right my black speedo is bulging just thinking about kent's pleasure

Great cocksucking story, would love to read more.

love this story speedos and sex can't beat the scene it made my red speedo bulge and get wet thanks and 5 stars!!!

there would be no door on my dorm room so I could receive their pleasure 24/7 at the leasure . Bi in heaven

Hot story. Swimming is always a trigger for me. I had some friends long ago and we would fool around everytime we went swimming. On to part 2. Thanks.

Lived the story, but hate the use of the word prick. Not a turn on for me

Great story !! Love it !!