All Comments on 'Dig Two Graves Ch. 02'

Way to short to fool with.

Oh look a flower!

you would have been better off delaying for a day or two and making the chapters longer.. The shortness of the chapters as they are make them a bit irritating and take away from the enjoyment of the story!

I agree that this chapter was a bit short, but it was a very good read. All the situations were believable, and it held my attention throughout. You're building the story gradually, piece by piece, and each new piece seems to fit well. Please keep it up. I would only ask that you give us a bit more to read in each chapter. I mean... it's a WHOLE DAY until we get the next chapter!

It really did not even set anything up. Also the part about leaving semen on the guys face. The Tim character would of have him cleaned because he would not want any to get on his clothes.

He is dropped off at hospital in a comatose state and no police report ? And if he wants to gat back at them he only needs to file a report of assault. Do some research before you write

Sorry, the biggest mistake is the choice of professions. It is so completely unlikely that a judge should seek such meassures, she knows the law. Her career would be totally bust. An imbecil could do it though.

Sorry

i don't understand this man ?

His wiffe tortured his balls till he have to go to hospital and he don't go to the police station to complain !!!!

frenchgus

I have to admit that it seems very strange that he spent a week in the hospital and no one from his law firm even came down to see him. It makes it sound as if the whole world is out to get him... and leaves wondering who is going to fill the two graves... Initially in the first chapter it was obvious

that Tom and Susan were to be paid back. But now I have to begin to wonder if Susan might not be a victim, too.. Perhaps Heidi and a partner at his law firm might have set Susan up to get rid of our hero... Lots of fun!

In fantasy we can have restraining orders without evidence of violent tendencies and hospitals that do not make police reports, so let's just enjoy the story.

He's begining to sound and look like a total wimp.

I know he only has one working ball, but that is no excuce.

HuwR

Australia

as everyone, i've got questions about the whole situation. If the writer's plan is to tickle us with a page and a half every couple of days, I'm bowing out.

cause he's surely gonna be taking them all up his ass.

I like the story and the way it's written, in spite of the somewhat unrealistic scenario. I have a question for those who read Ch 1 and commented about how bad the story is, why would you read Ch 2 if you were bothered by the events in the first chapter? If you read and didn't like Ch 1 your comments are valid. But if you then read Ch 2 and are still bitching, it's all on you.

I agree that there are some reality issues with the story, but I found it entertaining none the less and am looking forward to the conclusion. To Winterfox, I would suggest that you make the chapters a little longer even if it means posting every week or so. I feel it's okay to whet the appetite of the readers but don't tease them too much or you'll lose them.

Thanks for your hard work but do it faster please.

The whole point of having a catheter in place, the tube you refer to, is that it drains the bladder without effort on the part of the patient. Aside from that, the chapter was OK. I feel as though we are getting through a checklist of steps before we get to the real story.

That is obvious, but so far the guy's actions seem pretty subdued. He has no friends in town from work that could help him out for a night? He may not be a very nice guy. Even his parents take her side? He still wants to talk to her? What could she possibly do or say to make her actions okay? These questions mean you have my interest, but the first two chapters could have been one. What is the purpose in dragging this out. You have some real potential and I appreciate the effort. Thanks

While not an original story and I knew it was a set-up, this is well written and I'm looking forward to tomorrow's chapter. It will be discovered that the other attny had the "evidence" manufactured. I don't think he will return to his wife after she realizes that she was had, as contrite as she will be. drmike

This is an excellent story - combining two tough genres together and coming out with a winner! I suspect Jake's vengeance will be a terrible thing to behold! Looking forward to the next!

P.S. Absolutely love the title!

Not much happens in each chapter though. Thats usually not a problem for me but I am dying to know what's going on!

Keep up the good work,

Tyr

Get with it. this chapter had no value at all. Sit down, compose the rest of the story and post. People do it everyday. Writing ideas on the back of an envelope while taking a shit is not a post, not a chapter, and no way to write a story

Excellent Chapter 2. No fall off in quality. I look forward to future chapters but no wimp please but tough development.

Roger

the short chapters do not make it more entertaining, they are just annoying. When a story is so long that a single reading works then I understand, when an author uses them to add tension it might be ok, but only if the length justifies it.

As to the story itself, you are going to have to work very hard to make it believable from her. You have two well educated and bright people as main characters, so unless the evidence is very good and the plot very well written, you have set yourself up.

Now please go finish the story and post all of it.

I will probably not read any more until the story is completed. I lack the patience to read short bursts of this drama. I will also withhold any judgment on the story itself until it is completed, but your writing skills are obvious. You have real gifts for expression and characters who seem multi-dimensional. I look forward to more stories from you.

I have to echo the other comments. This was a very light chapter. It's necessary to sometimes do a little character development or situational descriptions but to keep things interesting you need to add a little meat as well. I am enjoying the story and it seems different enough from other stories I have read to keep me interested. I am really waiting for the bitch to get her comeuppance and to realize how stupid she really was. There was no justification to the extremes she took things and she shows no remorse. She is simply vicious. I am beginning to sense a wimp out because he didn't report them to the police. That would have been a strong retaliation, especially with her position. The only acceptable reason not to would be if his own retaliation exceeds the legal alternatives. I hope that's the case.

I love revenge stories. This one is setting-up to be a good one - especially with the double-lawyer thing. I am in the camp that distrusts them all, and despises most of them ... based on personal history. Of course, false imprisonment, mayhem, and a vindictive bitch wife with a back-stabbing accomplice gets the blood boiling, too. Keep it up.

I am with some of the other commenters, though. Meatier chapters are in order. This was a little frustrating.

<p>Really torn here...</p>

<p>One hand you have in the story a man who was blamed for something he claimed he didn't do, was viciously assaulted by the "one person" (an assistant DA who really knows the laws inside and out) in a horrific way in his home, had his nads literally put in a sling by her, she left him unconscious without a second thought at the hospital from her actions as coldly as she could make it, took all their money and left him begging on the side of the road for enough to make ends meet, and told everyone what he did "but" managed to leave out her affair she made him witness, the rubbing of her cum laden vagina on his face, and that he was in the hospital where she put him. Then the character is talking about how much love he still feels for her. Huh?</p>

<p>I lied, there really isn't another hand here. I'm just lost. Why would anyone literally go on about how much they loved someone who not only didn't confront them, but tried to harm them as much as they could just short of killing them?</p>

<p>I'm not trying to piss you off or pick on your story, but why isn't the character more angry at everything that happened to him instead of just going on about how much he feels for her still? </p>

<p>See I'm lost here.</p>

-Risq

this chapter was a waste of ink. if someone done what they did to him how did they get a stay away order and why does everyone including his parents think he done it. the story got to foolish.

Doing good so far in my judgement. As for some of the comments, damn it, it's only fiction and in the Loving Wives Category. As for his not being mad, etc., hell guys right now he can't even hardly walk or piss. So give him a couple of days to get his head back on. As the title to the story says, "Dig Two Graves"

A little longer in the chapters would be Ok, but keep writing at your pace and enjoy. Plus watch your time lines, was he in the hospital a week or a couple of days. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for your talent and courage.

Looking forward to the rest of the story and for that bitch to get what's coming to her.

God I hate this new commenting system..... Keep writing and make the chapters a little more interesting. This one was very boring. Could have been done in about 3 paragraphs.

He is behaving like any smart person who was blindsided and is in an information vacuum.

That female person is an district attorney. She can get away with a lot that ordinary people cannnot. Also any aggressive action against her will be resisted by her office and her police force.

I'm thinking that he is still getting his head around her new desire to dominate him using fake information cooerced from Heidi and others.

In other words let's see how the author plays this out

Obviously, the wife's actions were so extreme that he could never be safe with her again, no matter who "set him up." The title does suggest extreme violence will be the price paid, but you do need to set a basis for the apparently normal, and successful husband to be capable of that if that is your direction. I still find it hard to believe that a wife, even a betrayed one, would take such extreme action.

Were you drunk when you wrote this? Stupid plot line, did not need to read chapter 1 to come to this conclusion, husband dropped off at hospital and takes no further action like police report maybe and no other friends to help him out? Winter frogg's stories at least make sense

I had no idea that so many pages in word would condense to so few pages on a webpage! I had already submitted the first three chapters, but have now pulled the third chapter and will reformat so as to combine remaining chapters and have less submissions.

1. What DA (wife) would accept an affidavit of his secretary w/o first talking with her? You should not give the wife a job requiring brains if you don't expect her to use them. She works as a prosecuting attorney, she sees made up stuff all day long- probably including fudged photos.

2. There should have been a police report done, he had an injury to his head, his arms and legs exhibited burn marks, etc., etc.

3. His best revenge would have been to make this public. False imprisonment, torture, sexual battery, she would lose her job immediately. All he had to do is tell the truth. Even if they never actually tried the case, she is toast in that town.

The holes in this story are regretable for you do a good job writing.

Great story so far--- not very original but unrealistic. If wife and her lover beat him and semi-castrate him, then drop him off at hospital, it is unbelievable that police would not be there to find out what happened and file charges against wife and boyfrriend. Also unrealstic that everyone seems to believe in his guilt while he has no idea of what is going on. Please continue your great story.

60 year old George

Your chapters are too short. Publish the whole story like most people do!

I hope the next parts come in a timely manner. You have done a good job of setting up a very suspenseful situation, but one that it seems unlikely to turn out well.

Agree with many others that the premise of the story is absurd for all the reasons stated by others. But I just suspended my judgement and I'm enjoying the fantasy.

lol when he finally gets to the bottom of what happened i hope he does exactly what i said in the first part..after what has happened all i would be doing is thinking of revenge and if i was a good attn they would all pay out the fucking nose later ....and as for the wife ...you do mean ex wife...she couldnt ever be trusted again to do anything except be as far away as possible ...maybe that mexican whorehouse i said earlier ...now put him on his way for revenge and fuck up them all starting with mr schmidt and miss heidi then the ex wife

I have yet to ever figure out why anonymous reads any of our stories. I live real life, the good, the bad and the ugly and I come here for a little FANTASY and I don't give a shit if the story has an "unbelievable" premise if it is well written and interesting. This is both in my opinion. (so much so that I wonder if "winterfoxx" is someone we already know writing under a different name) I'm looking forward to future postings!

Reading chapter one, I found my self getting angry, felt my face start to burn and felt my pulse rate increase. That's what a good author does, he stimulates emotions. You sure did that to me! Chapter two was good, but I cann't help but think the best is yet to come. I can hardly wait!

A good story, but doesn't seem to be moving along too well.

Maybe it's the chapters are short, or just a lot of questions left to be explained.

Thanks for the post

But why has he not gon to the cops & had her arested for assault

the nonsense, against all odds, builds rather than diminishes! LOL

If this guy is being set up I certainly hope he will get his revenge. His wife is unreal especially with the TRO and leaving this guy moneyless and in the shape he is in. He made a good move not to meet her in her office as I'm sure it was a further set up of her husband. Some ADA she is. I certainly hope she does some follow up with her situation than to just take things for face value and not do some research. Maybe he should of press charges, I bet there would of been some follow up then but it might have now turned into a cover up. This guy deserves better if he is telling the truth on not cheating on his wife and I certainly hope he gets some measure of satisfaction from seeing them both crash and burn. Right now it doesn't look good for the hubby as the cards appear to be against him. As for his mother I can't believe she didn't question the daughter in law and get her head thinking about checking on the info she received. Thank goodness for the father otherwise this story wouldn't stand a chance.

Well, you certainly have attracted a riveting fan club. Ya must be pissin' razor blades!!! The pour chaps seem ta generally mill around two spitoons.

Haarrr Matey -- just fuck the wench with the mizen and the main!!! Then fuck her over 'n over again. Find the cock-wielding bastard 'n strap 'im to the cannon, balls first 'n and turn the festering puss sucking prick inta shark bait. There he blows!!!

The rest of the pub crawl mounted 'n rode their high-n-mighty steeds into the foray screaming "Ya drunken illiterate!!! Paragraphs, plots, surrealistic scenarios, and where the hell are the coppers??? Killl all the lawyers!!!"

Scabs the lot of 'em!!!

Shitey matey, its yur yarn, tell it well!!! Have a tankard 'n think up the most preposterous crud that ya can squeeze from yur grey pudding and serve the sweet smelling slop to the galley crew.

Personally, seen too much of this crapolla before the dom-rel courts. And it never makes sense, at all!!! If it makes sense in your mind, and has the right context characters, 'n background, then crack your inky whip and see if you can knock the the froth off a few chapters. If not, order another flaggon 'n call Tiger --- ask him what he'd do.

Lotsa luck mate.

This is a good story! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

I have read both chapters, and I agree they are way too short, and I still have a problem with the whole story. First, his wife as an ADA imprisoned hin, committed adultery, sexually assaulted him, and the inflicted harm on him. Then she dumped him at the hospital with witnesses to see it. The hospital did not call the police, he did not call the police. I would have so it would have triggered an investigation into the whole thing. She went so overboard that there is no way I would ever stay with her. Marriage is about love and trust. She blew the trust part no matter what the evidence was. She should have just divorced him. Now she expects him to come back to someone like that. Forget it. I would have him investogate her to see what is up and then hang the two of them out to dry as publically as possible. Please do not let him go back to her under anty circumstances. What would stop her from doing it again. Your first chapter was good. You dug yourself into a whole in the second one by letter everything go unsaid and then you have him meeting with her. Make sure he is wired complements of the DA's office or have it recorded by a PI while they are both out in public, with a friend as a witness. Maybe the nurse since you did seem to make it look like he had no friends. You have a lot of potential as a writer. Think this one through. Make it real.

I like it. I'm curious to see what's going on, who's trying to destroy the protagonist, and what his wife knows and doesn't know.

If you want to do short stories do them. But do not give us these short ass chapters damn this is dumb. If you can not write a complete story get help "damn you". ( Oh yeah this one seems pretty good!!!!!!)

Short cliche ridden chapters posted a day apart - wow that's original.

My, the protagonist seems to be taking all this rather well That is, I don't see much in the way of hard feelings on his part towards his spouse. Why agree to meet with her under any circumstances? Why talk to her? Is this guy just inviting more abuse or what?

If the protagonist was innocent as he asserts, I can't see why the guy would not report to the hospital staff exactly what happened, and then insist on filing a police report against his prosecutor spouse and her friend for battery and false imprisonment and publicizing it.

He could have caught the guy's DNA on his face, and her career would certainly be impacted in a negative way from the allegation, despite whatever story she cooked up as cover. The likelihood of such a result makes the whole plan improbable from the point of view of an Assistant D.A., unless it got out of control and thats why she was arguing with boyfriend.

A nice read nonetheless. Waiting for the vengeance part.

He seems to have no emotional response to anything? Gee, doctor, my balls are going to be allright, right? Oh, gosh, she has a TRO and she cancelled the accounts? Hmmm, that seems bad. Why has he not called a lawyer - not tomorrow, but today? The CHARACTER makes no sense; he is opposite extreme from his hasty, over the top wife and her idiot boy friend. And he made a big LEGAL mistake: he needed to tell the doctor at the time: now his evidence will not be admissable because it will be gone and the doctor can only say that maybe his wife dropped him off: he needed a police investigation and it is now she said/he said. So not only lacking in emotions, but lacking in intelligence. I know the story is not over, but you have a lot to repair and explain.

that goes something along the lines of the old chinese proverb 'if you plot revenge, then first dig two graves'. The authors' leading man didn't tell the doctors the whole thing because he will run it his way, and extract vengeance. Who will get to use the two graves? Hmmmm.

If this is going to be a saga of four or more chapters, they could be a bit longer because it is an entertaining writing style and plotline with pretty good pace and suspense.

Mostly it's a good read, apart from being way out there in a plausible or reality plot sense, and is a nice effort for a new writer, good work and keep it coming!

You are doing fine. Keep going please. Thanks

Keep it Coming . one of the Best Storys on here for awhile

I'm jealous ---- Wish I'd written it. I don't have a problem with the short daily dose. Just means that I've got something to look forward to each day for a longer period!!! Don't worry about the 'unrealistic' jibes. If it was 100% realistic then who would want to read it? I have absolutely no idea where this is going, and have already dismissed six or seven scenarios in my head. Can't wait. Please don't disappoint us.

This a badly thought out plot that has been done hundreds of times before but most of the others were more realistic than this one. The wife is in the legal profession and would be aware of the legal aspects of her action. The husband files no report/complaint with the police?

Winterfrog's submissions looks like O Henry's in comparison to this tale

don't pay attention to the naysayers. I would like to know why he wouldn't have exposed the kidnapping and abuse he suffered, I'd press charges against both of them. I can understand needing to find out what's going on, but I'd want payback, not just against the people who set me up but also against the wife who after all was the one who tortured, injured and put him in the hospital. I'd feel no need to protect her! I have to believe that imprisionment for an ada would be worse than death. Just my thoughts, good so far, looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't feel obligated to shorten or hurry things along. The chapters may be a little short, but you have a good set up here that needs to be explored in depth.

You write very well. Do not let the comments alter your story, you are writing for you and others are getting it for free. You can, of course, experiment in future stories, but try to remain faithful to your original plot for each one. If you don't it shows and makes the story patchy.

I just saw your comment about how so many pages of a Word document condense into so little on Lit. I had that problem when I first submitted as well. My first chapter barely made one page. I had submitted the second by the time the first was posted. I quickly pulled chapter 2 because it was half the length of chapter 1. So don't worry, you aren't the first and I'm sure won't be the last.

Realism does not play that big a part here - it what feels true. There are stories where husband sells his wife into white slavery and no ones questions that. There is also the factor where what people do in real life does not always makes sense. See mother kills teenager so her daughter can make cheerleaders. See break the leg of the top ice skater to guarentee that someone else makes the Olympic team. See leaving kids in car in summer while the parents drink in a bar, See ,,, ah never mind.

When's the next chapter.

Forget the criticism. I can't wait to see what happens next. It is all about the suspense and imagination. I wasn't expecting the next great short story.

I have enjoyed your earnest attempt at varying an old LW theme. You were consistent for two day, which was good because if you are going to do SHORT chapters, you could at least introduce one on consecutive days.

Where are you? Other chapters?

Winterfoxx:

While I will admit to being somewhat taken with your story, much about it troubles me. For example, just who is Tim Schmidt? Is he a co-worker or a family friend? Has he had a thing for Susie or is he just simply helping her out, as it were? To what anniversary does Susie refer regarding Tim's gift of the negligee: one with Jake or with Tim? Did Susie ever wonder who the person was who took the alleged incriminating pictures of Jake and Heidi? And did she consider at all why they were sent to her? And if not to her, how were they obtained by the person who must have showed them to her? And, if applicable, who was that person?

The actions attributed to Tim and Susie certainly seem to be illegal. Assault and battery and false imprisonment come to mind. With Susie being an ADA, one should assume she was aware of being involved in the commission of a crime(s). She should certainly realize that both she and Tim would be easily identified by hospital personnel as being the ones who delivered Jake to the hospital if charges were brought against both of them. If her career as an ADA is blossoming, then she must live in Boulder, Colorado. Her behavior seems pretty extreme for a practicing ADA.

Your story has been done before, but it is one that, if well and smartly written, I can continue to enjoy. In some of the previous others, the wife turns out to be a foil for her accomplice's shallow scheme to bed her. Usually these wives are attributed with above average intelligence, but I, as the reader, find that said intelligence is little apparent by how easily they are duped by these other males. I sincerely hope that such is not the case with your story. It would be refreshing and enjoyable to read a reasonable and plausible explanation for what has taken place so far.

Lastly, didn't anyone miss Jake for the two days he was in the hospital? Just curious. I would have thought that his parents, after hearing from Susie, would have tried to somehow contact him. I may be incorrect, but I believe Jake's a lawyer as well. Yet it seems that legal retribution has not crossed his mind.

I do look forward to your continuance of your story. I'm really curious to read how you resolve it. Thanks for what you've submitted so far.

that they think this is a GOOD story. I think maybe this is a comedy.. at the end of chapter 2 where the idiot partiaslly mutilated husband is wondering about why she doesnt KNOW how much HE LOVES her?H

After a very unoriginal first chapter which I criticized, this is much better.

Your comments might be acceptable if you were not so vitrolic. As they are you come across as a complete asshole, and an illiterate one also. For Christ sake only make a comment when you ane not drinking. You do not do yourself a favour. The language in most of your comments reeks of boose. If you cleaned that up you might be more believable.

To the author..... I'm sorry. Got carried away. I love this story. Top points for you. Thank you. Jim

I don't find this story all that great, however I want to find out if this writer can bring it back to reality.

for cuckold

It might be not the smartest Idea, but personally if my wife did something like that to me ... can you spell car bomb ?

Keep up the good work

And she will have earned every bit of it -

"I figured. She told us she was going to drain the accounts because she thought you would siphon everything out of them. How much do you need?"

So why not take half! Greedy bitch!

And why cancel credit cards?

I'm glad he wised up about the TRO. I read another story where the wife asked to meet and then had him arrested for violating a TRO.

I hope the author is building to some worthwhile climax. "Doesn't she realize how much I care about her?" (Or words to that effect.) He didn't seem to care that much about her before he got home. And once he got home... We need the "Seinfeld" soup Nazi to tell her, "No forgiveness for you!"

Can't put it down.

And go to prison with a smile on my face!!!

We can credit the great writing of Winterfoxx for generating the powerful emotions experienced while reading this story. The protagonist is much more even-tempered than I would have been though, he's way too calm for my money. Looking forward to the battle ahead. Still 5 stars...

She is a ADA and he is a lawyer to??!!! Are you insane??!! If he gets the evidenc in the hospital of the sperm on his face she and her chum are going to prison for a long time!! So if you write a story even it's a fantasy , the relity have to be recognizable!!!

I would gladly serve time to shred this cunt and the idiot who started it.... Well done 5****

Truth...If my wife and her lover did to me what this bitch and her lover did to Jake, I swear on my wife's very life, that I would shoot and kill both of them, even if it meant me going to prison. .Or worse.

I meant to mention in Ch 1, why did he lie to the hospital and tell them what happened? Sure she's an ADA and it's his word against theirs, but the wounds on his wrists and ankles, not to mention his groin should go a long way towards backing him up.

She’s afraid he’ll drain the accounts? So take the HALF that she’s entitled to!

Starting off pretty good. We'll see. I really hate it when a story starts strong then dribbles off and becomes over written. There may have been some typos or misspellings or what ever...punctuation...I'm not a grammar Nazi not a believer in "correct" way to do things....So...Write on! I'm reading!

She just tied him to a chair, fucked some other dude in front of him and then tried to castrate him. How does some dumbshit writer even begin to think he can clear that with any form of reality. Try to pull some cuck bullshit RACC out of this and you've got a guy wondering when she'll tie him up again for another round of humiliation and physical injury.

A BIG ?, why has he not had her and her friend arrested.

And he didn't tell the police about the assault and aggravated battery at any point, to easily skip all these problems, because a martian riding by in Santa's sleigh told him not to?

he's a lawyer...in a firm...and he can't get his shit together and call on any resources over several days? Again, BS.

if he pressed charges....nothing else would have mattered.

she raped him, tore his literal ball off.

'h-he cheated on me your honor..' that shit wouldn't fly. they'd be divorced alright...but she'd be in prison...the split would be in HIS favor. she'd have to pay his medical bills...and god knows how much in civil he could get for emotional damages.

and you would have been able to explore male rape. a largely avoided topic. what a wasted story.

He should have told the doctor the truth, and had her arrested on assualt. She possibly maimed him. Then when he was talking to he, insist on lie detector tests for all 4 persons involved.

He should call police immediately and.make a report. Cut the bitch no slack.

stupid man ,she tie him to a chair ,makes him watch her fuck another almost tears his balls off ,and he has feeling for her ,stupid man.

Unreadable. Absolutely unbelievable. Good start, but someone dropped off user those circumstances doesn't being a criminal investigation? More believable with dragons, fairies and unicorns. All three of these people were officers of the court. Any decent cop would get the witnesses in the ER to positively identify the wife and boyfriend, and then shit goes south on the perpetrators. Disbarred. Jail. Game over. 1/5.

I agree with Legio. Why would he refrain from telling about being battered and imprisoned? The character is a putz.

What kind of English Grammar is taught in schools these days? I have seen the following error in many stories. Would you say or write that you might urinate yourself?

They ran an IV drip and I got to the point where I just had to go to the bathroom or I was going to piss myself.

They ran an IV drip and I got to the point where I just had to go to the bathroom or I was going to piss ON myself.

Utter stupidity. There is no world in which he would have concealed from the treating doctor how he was severely injured by his wife. He would have gotten the cops involved, regardless of whether she was an ADA or not. He had injuries like severe chafing to his wrists and a testicle so badly damaged that he could lose it; she would have to come up with a hell of a story. Why would he protect her? I love my wife, but that love would be completely gone if she did anything like this to me, regardless of her (mistaken) belief that I had been cheating. This gets 1* for being such a ridiculous premise on which to base wherever this monstrosity of a story is going.

If my wife did that to me, hell, if ANYBODY did that to me, you can bet the police, the doctor, my parents, her parents, EVERYBODY would hear about it. What does it serve to keep it secret??? That's just stupid and it's stupid to put it in a story that way.

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And it sure takes him a long time to decide whether or not to divorce her - way too fucking long. Someone who does that to you, yeah, they don't love you and I doubt they ever did. He's way too easy on this cum-sucking whore.

Some family. They try, convict and execute him without getting his side of things?

They'd be history if it was me.

Disgusting. Stopped reading. I wish we could block content from certain author from appearing

She's a D.A. and she kidnapped him and sexually assaulted him. Her career would now be over and I would divorce her while she was serving her time. She knows she pulled some illegal shit but her anger made her stupid. He woulda told the doctor everything and had a medical document as proof of her abuse. He would have her dead to rights, he could Subpoena the douchebag co conspirator and force him to lie under oath before blowing holes in his alibi. This MC woulda have sooooo many moves! But he chooses suffering?

It's sinking fast.