All Comments on 'Directed: His First Account'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Well done, finish it!

Soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What s/he said

Yes please...soon!

OENsHIMOENsHIMover 6 years ago
"And 'seemed' in sex may as well be 'IS'...as you may have noticed..."

And then there's the reinforcement...

I love smoothing the wax strip into place...pausing to exhale...watching him quiver in expectation

But this isn't about us.

Super story.

Do continue, please...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Brilliant

I bet, unfortunately, it runs afoul of the quick-wank-in-the-bathroom brigade because it is:

* brilliant

* subtle

and in my experience, extremely accurate in how it unravels.

Another one, please, as soon as possible.

I give it 5 stars!

AnonanonymousAnonanonymousover 6 years ago
Love it!

You have our undivided attention...and approval. Superb!

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