All Comments on 'Dirty Dialogue with Mommy'

not saying it's bad but this is the kind of thing that happens when you don't like doing any kind of scene/setting for anything RP or otherwise. All stories have a scene, all games have a scene, every situation has a scene, a setting, a theme. You can write dialogue all day long but it's just that... talking, words... in the end it's pretty much nothing. The details make the story come to life, the less you reveal at the start of the story the more drawn in people will be. Keep working at it and you'll get better. As it stands this just looks like a script for a porn video.

Short but intense, love it!

I'm so glad that mommy got a great banging from her son. Incest is amazing!! I was fortunate to be able to play with my mom and regularly fuck her. She loved having a young hard di k penetrating her moist pussy.

Loved the entire story! I"m glad a read every chapter.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

find_two2@hotmail.com

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I LOVE the mommy-son talk! So beautiful and sexy. I want to keep reading all about how much they love each other and all of their sex.

HOW old are you?

Beautiful. More please?

What a hot story

Great premise but would never really happen. Would much prefer a slower buildup of Mommy asking to play with her sons Big, Thick & Hard Meat Stick..!

Not bad. Build the story slower, and more pages please.