All Comments on 'Discoveries of a Young Man Pt. 01'

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Anonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting start, please continue.

tonydxx over 1 year ago

Good start. Looking forward to Pt.02

Oldbutbold over 1 year ago

5 stars

As others said good start , look forward to next chapter , well done .

chytown over 1 year ago

***Thanks for the read.

thomas1965 over 1 year ago

Overall, not bad for the first time.

I don't like the info-dump on the paragraphs 3-7.

A Google search for info-dump stories will show you better ways.

oldtwit over 1 year ago

As you said, pretty slow start

greywolf12 10 months ago

Very nice buildup, realistic and erotic. I am looking forward to read the next chapters!

Anonymous2 months ago

This seems like a slight rework from a series of about 15 years ago. And yes I’ve been a devoted reader for even longer than that.

vriesea about 2 months ago

You have a good sense of humor and it shows in your writing. 5 stars

Anonymous27 days ago

Kind of a bad start with a creepy wierdo

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