All Comments on 'Discovering Amber Ch. 04'

by Ms_Allison

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Lovely story

I loved it, I was secretly hoping that your friend would find out about your little secret and do something about it haha. I think you should get a little spanking for every grammatical error though ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
ADD MORE SOON PLEASE

Am loving this story and wish I were in Ambers position, please add more soon please

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
MORE!

Really well written. Hope you have more in this story line on the way soon!...:)

fran969fran969about 4 years ago
The Female ? sex slave

As I said before only a female writer like you could create such a believable tale..

cdCindy1cdCindy1about 4 years ago
love this story

All the shopping from the last chapter and the details about the sexy clothes in this chapter really made me horny and hard. I would love to go shopping with my Mistress Nadia and I plan to do so very soon. The ending of this chapter is also great and I myself would love to be able to "come out" to my best female friend (or one of my wife's closest friends). I do need help with make-up but I don't have a cock-cage -- don't want one and my mistress agrees. She likes me cumming all over myself because she loves watching me lick it all up clean.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Hopefully Amber gets to suck a real cock soon and get fucked by a real man.

Hugs & kisses,

cdCindy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
wish it were me

you made story so lifelike and a dream for someone like me

punkboyoipunkboyoialmost 3 years ago

That moment of being caught at the end was perfect. Well done! I could feel so clearly through the story that moment of shock, fear, and accepting the inevitable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I loved it. Amber and I have had parallel lives. My girlfriend Ann is exactly like Ms. alli. That is after a woman named Karen who hated my lingerie and my Mexican girlfriend who was very sympathetic but not for her man.Ann has molded me into a cock crazed slut who is always dressed very slutty. I am waiting for next Tuesday for my implants

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Poorly thought out and badly written

friskyboifriskyboiover 1 year ago

Lol hot and sexy muffin caught

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