by CreativeChick
*Definitely* sexy-- but I'm still wondering whether she spiked Julia's drink? lol That clever Natalia knows her moves! Whether she cares about the lingerie sales or not, she knows how to set the mood & push all the right buttons.
Strongly sensuous and seductive writing, whether Julia's been chemically enhanced or not!
For a short encounter the story timing seemed just right. Like your point of view and hope to read more of your work. Please continue this story line; Julia has so much more to learn. BTW as a guy, a pox on anyone who doesn't pay proper attention to a ladies fair assets.
Well written, very hot, but not rushed. Maybe develop the main character a bit more. I feel like I get into the story more if I get to know the main character a bit more before the hot stuff begins. Please continue this story.
I have never had anyone give me an orgasm. I so know what that story was about. I would like to have the ending that she did,. What a turn on!!!! Loved it!!!
Can't wait to read the next chapter when she either walks back out to the party, spends the weekend with Natalia or hosts her own party *wink-wink*
Joking apart a "nice" erotic story,well executed,well written,Especially on the second reading More please
A very lovely and gentle story,!!.
I do hope you will add another chapter, -- Well done,
It was such a delight to finally find a story that focused so intently on the pleasure of having your nipples stimulated. Mine are particularly sensitive and I abso-totally adore it when someone pays them the kind of attention you describe in your story. Thank you for such an enthralling piece.
Short CREATIVE and Hawt! I am surprised there is no Part 2. Would have loved to read more about Julia's seduction, her reaction to Natalia's suggestion and where her friend Amy fits into all of this...... could Amy be the third one?
Sex under the influence is an assault. According to feminist which was accepted by higher learning institutions and then the law.