All Comments on 'Disruptive Student Ch. 03 - Art Class'

But please get an editor. It's pretty obvious that, whatever you are, a teacher you're not!

Yea, sorry, I reread over these, but still tend to miss stuff. I would love an editor, but I don't know anyone who could do it.

The story switches between past and present tense a couple of times. Distracts from the narrative, which is a shame because it's hot.

Thanks. I actually have an editor now, so there are fewer errors with my newer stories.