by sr71plt
I loved and hated reading this. I wanted to scream at them to talk to each other..by God just talk to each other..see what you are doing? What you are missing with your silence? Great job..but please don't let it be the end..a first chapter..maybe? I hope!
I keep reading your stories and you just keep getting better and better. I love this story and I definitely agree with the first comment. You HAVE TO do another, I wanna know what happens!!! PLEASE???!!!
they need to communicate and work things out! don't leave them like this!
This just makes me so sad--please please write a second chapter where they actually communicate!!!!
This is a beautifully crafted story. It is simple and perfect. Don't taint it with another episode.
really sad but beautiful at the same time. There should be another episode to see if they can finally communicate!!
Oh my goodness this was amazing. I rarely comment on stories by I just have to tell u something: keep writing this story it's too good for it to end like this
This is one of the most beautiful storie I've ever read ... thank you for enriching my life ...
I agree with (nearly) everyone else - please give them a happy ending. This is too sad as a one-shot.