All Comments on 'Distractions'

Great start! Can't wait for the next installment!

I absolutely love the beginning! Gavin sounds like a man after my own heart and Red is too cool!

absolutely awesome!

Well-written and powerful. Congratulations, and thanks.

love it, can't wait for more

terrific writing and I loved the cliffhangers, Cannot wait for the next chapter.

Please hurry with the next chapter! I'm so into this story and these characters! I hope Red get's with Gavin! He's hot!!!

What happens next?

Great start, great characters and very interesting. Keep it coming.

enjoyed the story and characters, hope there are more chapters!!!!!!

this story sounds kinda like your desiree one(brother's hot best friend). I am not knocking your style just making an observation. I am in the Military and if I wrote (I don't) my stories would probably be have an army theme to it or a cheerleading if it was based in high school.

So, I realized that Distractions is somewhat similar to Desiree's Star in that the main character likes the brothers friend.

But in Distractions, Red, Gavin and Brenden are best friends. In Desiree's Star, Desiree and Gabriel couldnt stand each other, which for me gives the story an entirely different dynamic.

Of course I realize that the stories are similar, but what can I say, I like what I like. Each of these stories is based loosely in reality and experiences I've had, so its kinda hard to part from what i know.

But thanks for all the comments, and enjoy!

Keep the chapters coming!!

Promising first chapter.

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I've waited and waited for this writer to complete the story! How sad, it's definitely one of my favourites, I almost wish someone else would finish the story!

What a load of crap! This story was so interesting it had me up all night just to realise it is an unfinished story. .aaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrgghhhhh!

FIRST WORDS OF CHAPTER ONE:

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Hey everyone. I'm at it again, and this time, the story was finished before I posted chapter 1.

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Author is lying, LAST WORDS OF LAST CHAPTER (EIGHT YEARS AGO):

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"I don't like this. Not at all," Gavin said as Bren pulled away from the curb. He was still fingering the small black box in his pocket. No, Gavin didn't like this.

"

Not only is the story not finished, but it "ends" on a cliffhanger that is never resolved.

Do not bother investing yourself any further because even though the story was pretty good, the author is a liar.