All Comments on 'Distractions Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
UM

great, i wish theyd hurry up and get together though

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
AWESOME!

Damn this is getting even better than the first chapter!!! Great writing and character development. I love everything about this so far and look forward to the next part!!!

hotcocoa6904hotcocoa6904over 15 years ago
Great!!

This is a great story!! Please don't wait to long for the next chapter!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good job.

it was goood keep it coming :]

mrskelleymrskelleyover 15 years ago
Great Story!

Just found it! I like how you are not rushing them together, I like reading the build up of the characters. Can't wait for more!

riverrockriverrockover 15 years ago
Love it

I love your story, cant wait for more

SecretFantasy69SecretFantasy69over 15 years ago
This is lovely...Great pacing!

Great story, great pacing! Please give us more!

KoollavaKoollavaover 15 years ago
I Like this

More please. I like the tension between Gavin and Red. I like that Gavin has a dominiant side and I can't wait to see how that unfolds.

robgirl83robgirl83over 15 years ago
awesome!

I love your stories, i feel like i am there! great and can't wait for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
HOT!!

Totally loving this story... can't wait for the next instalment

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 15 years ago
I'm loving this story!

Please update soon!

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