by HotSprings22
Damn this is getting even better than the first chapter!!! Great writing and character development. I love everything about this so far and look forward to the next part!!!
This is a great story!! Please don't wait to long for the next chapter!!
Just found it! I like how you are not rushing them together, I like reading the build up of the characters. Can't wait for more!
Great story, great pacing! Please give us more!
More please. I like the tension between Gavin and Red. I like that Gavin has a dominiant side and I can't wait to see how that unfolds.
I love your stories, i feel like i am there! great and can't wait for the next installment!