All Comments on 'Divine Intervention'

that sounds painful

I thought it was fairly exciting. I always enjoy a story that gives the down-and-out a chance at the good life. Keep writing; I'll read it.

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Its decent enough, i know i will be looking for a follow up

J

Good story but not great. Needs a little more character development but could turn into several good stories with a combination of the female characters and male lead. Liked the pub descriptions, erminded me of growing up in Newcastle