All Comments on 'Diving in the Deep End'

Dont make it third person

Make more

still waiting

Did you write the next one

This reads like a comic book, nothing in depth, everything about as shallow as a rain puddle, and delivered like a ten year old on speed.

I know it has been a long time since you posted this, but any chance, even remote, of the sequel coming out?

This was well done, it deliberately reads like a Flash Gordon type of cartoon, it doesn’t take itself seriously either, very tongue in cheek. 4⭐️