by Selena_Kitt
This is a great story, told at a perfect pace. You really captured the mood of the moment extremely well.
It would appear You manipulate words as well as You manipulated Your husband--lucky us and lucky him !
Great story! You certainly know how to describe a blowjob....
I was throbbing along with him reading your story.
I'd like to suggest another story:
If your female protagonist AGREED with the donation and wanted to help him raise his sperm count she could be the World's Best Cock Teaser.
Example: He's in bed naked reading a book. She enters in an outfit that would make a victoria'ssecret designer blush.
Gives him good night peck on the cheek then turns to his testicles, kisses each one and says "Sleep tight little spermies! You've got a busy day tommorrow." She crosses her legs & turns her back.
Just immagine what she can do in the porno room with him.
Abdulbenthere
As usual, so well written, with great pace. And you have such a knack for making the naughty observations. I love this line: "or fingering myself tomorrow while you're at your appointment and imagining you jerking off..."
While the female lead of this story was meant to seem naughty, and while your depiction was successful, the playfulness with her partner also came across as endearing and cute. It added to what the characters shared. Good job.
You know, if it wasn't a loving husband and wife I would call her a terrible cock-tease.
But when you're married you can do anything. As long as love is involved. A funny little tale.
And I thought you were exceptional in Short shorts. This one was every bit as hot. Your blow job scenes are out of this world. I find myself shuddering as I read this story. Your writing skills are up with, and arguably surpass, the best on this site. Simply WOW !
Another 5-ššššš