All Comments on 'Doctor in Danger'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great!

I'm rather new to this site, and this is the first of

your works that I've read. Loved it! Moved from sad to

funny flawlessly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Where is the heart

<p>This story lacks the emotionality and "heart" of your other stories. You used to address such a three-some with a deft hand of compassion. You also used to have some mention of the disposition of the lost love too. </p>

<p>This story remains a good outline and nothing more.We learned more of the patients than the main characters. </p>

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Just what the doctor ordered.

Looks like the doctor landed himself the perfect living arrangement after the hopelessness he went through. Very engaging trio of lead characters while the supporting characters in the form of the eccentric patients with their unusual ailments served as great comic relief.

Fubar2kFubar2kover 15 years ago
Reads like a documentary

Not a good story - could have been, but the way it was written sounded pompous, or as a doco. Not your best by a long chalk.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Another testament to the male

unable to think with the large head!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
VERY NICE

I really enjoyed this story, it read like an adult version of Doc Martin.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Fun

Lots of fun. A great read. Thanks.

Oxford99Oxford99almost 13 years ago
Good story.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
a brilliant story

what a lucky bugger to get two willing women to fuck him...must be sex heaven....I envy him.......a great read....well done.....

fairyfellowfairyfellowover 9 years ago
Titillating! Dear Doctor Martin, you and your Staff deserve a SIXTH Star!

Nimble witted prose, a real hum dinger of a story and plot. Well beyond and definitely above the usual prick & twat authoring here.

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