by Moondrift
I'm rather new to this site, and this is the first of
your works that I've read. Loved it! Moved from sad to
funny flawlessly.
<p>This story lacks the emotionality and "heart" of your other stories. You used to address such a three-some with a deft hand of compassion. You also used to have some mention of the disposition of the lost love too. </p>
<p>This story remains a good outline and nothing more.We learned more of the patients than the main characters. </p>
Looks like the doctor landed himself the perfect living arrangement after the hopelessness he went through. Very engaging trio of lead characters while the supporting characters in the form of the eccentric patients with their unusual ailments served as great comic relief.
Not a good story - could have been, but the way it was written sounded pompous, or as a doco. Not your best by a long chalk.
I really enjoyed this story, it read like an adult version of Doc Martin.
what a lucky bugger to get two willing women to fuck him...must be sex heaven....I envy him.......a great read....well done.....
Nimble witted prose, a real hum dinger of a story and plot. Well beyond and definitely above the usual prick & twat authoring here.