All Comments on 'Doll Collar Pt. 02'

god you did it again another wonderful story to add to your beautiful world and.....PS i defiantly would love to see a master assassin story line

I read a few of your stories and have enjoyed them. But I wonder why they get so dark after awhile. Good things could come to all if you let it! After all its just a story.

first chapter was awesome, this one was not, rating drop probably means many agree, too bad

The good, what an amazing story. I find myself entranced with every chapter, so much detail it's wonderful.

The bad, I didn't think Nick Shaw was going to be in this universe, not saying its a bad thing, just not expected.

The story, not wanting to dive to deep on this, but if Carman knew that Nick was the hidden master then wouldn't she have had to been in the secret order, I forgot the name of it. Also, would that make her Japanese?

-Netherlands

more please

are all your storys in univers?

It seems that there is something going to happen between James and his sister in law and him he needs to make her one of his slaves her younger sister that’s just as beautiful

I enjoy your stories ....... please write more doll collar stories

Doll collar was awsome, this story beats it.

a real story with more than alone fucking fucking And more......

a plot, real erotic parts and of course real porn.

come on, part 3 int he making?

This has been a; absolutely fantastic story. I hope one day you decide to continue it. I’d love to learn what he discovered about his brother and his wife and about the part human races.

Let us off this cliff, please continue this

This was so damn good...i really hope u continue this!!! This is awesomr..what did he discover?!?!

Oh no! I have to wait for more???

I think you're doing a great job with this. Thank you!

Well that went downhill fast

That ended on a down note. It will be interesting to see what happens next.

This definitely needs to be finished, but looking at when it was written I doubt it ever will be

The main character taking down a secret society, Let's go! I do hope there will be more.

This was great. I do hope you continue this series. It's one of my favorites. I loved it!

Follow up?

Confusing ending.

Needs more

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