All Comments on 'Dominance'

by Ashson

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
Ellienora35Ellienora35about 8 years ago
More please?

This one begs for more. Most of your stories are one shot pieces, but this one has the ability to be a real novella or novel. Please pretty please develop it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wow that was bad

Out to dinner? Really?

CignettaRosamundCignettaRosamundabout 8 years ago
Possible Continuation....

Dinner was good,despite the circumstances.

Of course he offered me wine.He drank tomato juice, being the designated driver.

Again he took me-but not before letting me have some of his juice.

I let him have the rest.

He smirked back at me, not knowing the real reason for my smile.

The next day, there was an article in the papers about a man dead in his car,cause unknown.

Its amazing what tomato juice hides.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Brilliant.

I love the level of reluctance in your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wonderful!

Firsf story of yours that I read, AND my favorite one. Just wonderful.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous