All Comments on 'Donnie Dates His Family Pt. 03'

Thanks for the new chapter really helps me relax during this time hope to see more hope you stay safe.

What a nice family !!!!!! Keeping Mom, Twins & Aunt happy.

You've got to start rereading your work. Wrong names were used several times throughout your work, misspelled words and sentences that didn't make sense. We will wait for your next chapters. Donnie can make his break with the next door neighbor, her mother and sister, the cop across the street,her mom and sisters, maybe two others female cops, other female trainers that work with Roxy and Grandma. Have fun , but proof your work.

XYZ

Great story line. You never went back to the neighbor or the cop who climbed the tree. Don't leave us hanging. And who the hell is David?

Like your writing a lot. But really, need to find a proof reader. Might sound silly but small errors, misnames and bad spelling takes away from the story at the bad moments.

Great story and in hoping for one more chapter atleast so the cop/friend/neighbour can get involved. I must sadly say I only give you ⭐⭐⭐⭐ only because of the name mix ups , just makes it more pleasurable than questioning who is who . Great work though please keep writing j

You definitely need to finish this series. Please!!!!!!

this is a great storyline. Please continue right more chapters.

I too am hoping you will keep going with this sexy tale. I want to know how many of his family are knocked up by the time he comes home from ravishing Gran. Then of course he might also seduce Tanya the cop and knock her up as well.

Told in a light hearted manner so it’s a fun read.

Some other stories try to be deadly serious & fail on all counts. A solid 4.

Bill

It was great story but they there few few times when the names were mixed up. Overall is was great and hoping for more of this story.

Please add new chapters with donnie fucking grandma, aunt, mom and sisters

Very Fun und Funny!

11/10 Sandwiches!!!!!

Liked it but mom can't have a high sex drive and not have it for 15 years

Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

It is a pity that the author discontinued this story because it has a lot of potential to be continued. Donnie has yet to conquer the police officer, the waitress and her mother, his grandma... Will the Brixworths see satisfied their cravings without being consumed by their lust? I hope so.

es

Need more chapters, this is a very hot story line that hasn't finished yet. we are all waiting for more.

“Roxy thought about how she came home and caught Donnie fucking his twin sisters, her daughters, the night before when she came home.” That’s where I stopped reading. The writing is pure trash, and maybe only suitable for a quick jerk. I won’t be reading any more of your material.

On to Gramma's cunt....er house we go!

You obviously put yourself into your story wholeheartedly! I'm enjoying this series very much and agree you should pick it up again.I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your writing. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

I love this story but again it's another amazing story you've written but unfortunately left unfinished. Love to see what happens with grandma and also Jade and her mother and of course Tanya too

Good beginning. But again left unfinished. Please continue with further chapters

Great story. Thank you.