All Comments on 'Don't Answer the Door!'

Loved this story, it was perfect!

Holy shit this is something else!

oh wow! wow oh man made me cum twice in the same read!

This is totaly rad! Good stuff right there!

I'd be happy having this happen for real. Had to stop midway and play with my wetness.

Clever too.

The title says it all. Its even better than some bestsellers ive read!! Loved it!

Thanks for taking the time to both read my story and leave feedback! I hadn't written anything before this and I love reading Literotica, so I thought what better place to lose my virginity than the Halloween contest!

I also wanted to apologize to any Incest fans if they read the story and were disappointed that it didn't tread deep enough into that territory. When I submitted I selected Group Sex as the category; Literotica made the decision to place it in Incest/Taboo.

They probably made that decision based only on your quick description of the story. I really liked it, even though I was hoping for the taboo angle, just also wish the ending hadn't been so abrupt. Hope you write more like it. Good suspense all throughout and especially at the end.

For a BS story this was awesome! I was totally into it. Doesn't belong in the incest section though. Great job, now lets have a story about a possessed Easter Bunny!

Looking forward to seeing more from the hand of this author in the future.

Lets be honest...this is pretty damn well written and has enough sex to bust three nuts.

Which I did.

I have never commented or voted before but this was way too good of a story not to.

I really hope you win this contest.

It was, on the whole, a very entertaining and funny story, as well as erotic. The last little bit though, where Andrea's thoughts put her in the category of "cheating wife" instead of "caught in the weird magic" threw me off just a bit. Beside that bit it was great, that part just seemed unnecessary.

Granted, it's likely due to my own history on the subject, but it was just a little pointless jab at her. Still a 4/5 though.

This was so well written! Such an amazing story. I couldn't stop reading it. I did hope for a bit of daddy-daughter fun, but other than that it was amazing! I'd vote for you(;

That was an awesome story full of excitement and humor!!! 5 stars!

Perhaps someone hid the cauldron until April 30 and scheduled a party? Allison and her father get it on? Wonderful story, found it when I read your Christmas story.

Die Geschichte hat mir sehr gut gefallen. Bis zum Ende habe ich gehofft, daß Alec Allison noch vögelt, aber nichts der gleichen. Macht nichts, war trotzdem sehr interessant. Vielleicht war die Story einfach nur "tabu", eine Straßenorgie ist ja auch in Deutschland nichts alltägliches.

Translation:

Where is hidden the incest?

I liked the stoty very much. Up to the end I hoped, that Alec screws Allison, but nothing like that. Does not matter, nevertheless it was a pretty interessting tale, nearly a fairy tale. Perhaps it was only a "taboo"-story, a street-orgy is also in Germany not a daily occurence.

I really hope you do a follow up story or a spin off with it it happening to some other family just that they aint got a clue whay or why.

I really liked the story, i loved the storyline, great story but lacked incest.

Just a heads up to new readers of this story that I have written a sequel - The Cauldron.

Thanks for reading, Seanathon.

That...was fucking awesome!!!

This was a good story. I must be getting old because I kept thinking about the std's they were sharing and the multiple dna tests they were gonna need! Lol

Don't forget Pam found her son ...

Great story!

This was a very fun story. I loved the plot. It definitely had both intrique and plenty of sex without all the normal sex scenes.

hahahaha all the costume themed dick jokes were hilarious, made the story even better.

Lol, how the heck did this wind up in the incest section? Heh

LOL

It's a fertility ritual. How do families react when all the possessed women turn up pregnant? And when families realize that only the mother is actually a biological parent, and you'd have to genetics test the whole neighborhood or town to figure out who the fathers are? How does Alec deal with what he saw of his wife's behavior - and probably can't unsee? So many questions....