All Comments on 'Don't Fucking Touch Me Ch. 01'

Charming premise.

Well written.

But the sex was rushed. Lacked details. Needed more direction/instruction as to how to likc her pussy. Needed dialog abiut whether he'd ever seen/touched/played with/licked/fucked a pussy. Needed discussion about whether he liked its look. Its smell. Its taste.

Needed discussion about how often he jerked off. To porn? What kind? What kind of women did he prefer?

Did he like boobs? What would he like to do to/with hers?

Four stars.

A waste of time, 5 minutes I can't get back. Not erotic at all. Really strange effort, why would this even be considered a story there is nothing here. No place to even go, boring.

The writer does a good job of setting the stage and establishing an atmosphere. The story balances between imagination and a feeling this really happened. As far as the sex goes, it achieves believability and has an air of honest authenticity to it. I enjoyed the story and found the writers effort to be quite well constructed.

Hi, I enjoyed part one and I am looking forward to part two and how you develop the story and characters!

Reacher?

Yes, Neagley as a kid from the Jack Reacher novels. The guy isn't Reacher, of course, what with being a pacifist.