All Comments on 'Don't Piss Off the Devil'

This is the best story I have seen so far (though I'm new so don't take it seriously). After cumming quite early, I literally stayed for 45 minutes straight just to see the plot thiccens.

Though, this story probably isn't special... I'll see when I have read more...

A nicely constructed story but word usage, particularly adverbs, had multiple errors.

Regular spell checkers won't pick up a word that needs (or shouldn't have) a ly ending. You need a checker that is fine-tuned (even MS Word 2016+ should work) or another set of eyes to proofread. Find the tools and your craft will go from good to exceptional.

I like your story, the imagination of it, the situations. Others do as well, obviously, by the votes--they just don't all say it aloud, lol. Favoriting.

Great job on a great story! We all loved it and look forward to more! Five stars earned! Five stars given!