All Comments on 'Don't Tell Me Any More'

This is a hot and quite well-written story. We can sometimes throw caution to the wind with those we love -- the narrator's melange of trepidation and determination and desire imparts a sense of realism to the whole affair. Would love to read more of this couple's adventures.

Unusual twist half way through the scene, but very well written description of the emotions involved. Keep writing

What a lovely story, i was excited reading it as i half understood the situation from the outset. What you did in this short story was truly beautiful though, as you used so few words to describe the way two lovers can work together in an honest way to fulfill their fantasies... Well done and Five Stars.

I have secretly harbored this fantasy. Your description of "taking her" is so sensuous and erotic. Your own excitement and arousal from fulfilling her secret desire is clearly revealed in your writing. The intensity of her climax attests to the fact that her desire "to be taken" was far more than just a fantasy.

Bravo!

You can really tell the gender and sexuality of the authors on this site. Reading this, I knew there was no way this was written by a man because to be honest, it felt too real. This story was well written, sexy, and authentic. The realisticness, along with the passion made this a 10/10 read for me. This clearly wasn't made just to get someone off and you can see that in the vivid detail and intense atmosphere. That being said, it certainly did get me off. *Sweats* Also, the strap on sex was .... *Sweats more*

For what it is worth to you, all of your stories are based on good, erotic ideas but you cant develop a story or characters in only one or two pages. You need to expand on the original idea, develop your characters tell the reader what is in their minds.

Loved the erotic tension here